Spare No Haste
Kyrielle poetry contest4 total reviews
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
The poem, 'Spare No Haste', is deep.
My favorite part: 'I beg you, death, please spare no haste.'- This says to the reader that one wants it done quickly. The writer wants death NOT to spare the hurry.
The artwork is awesome. The image shown supports the poem. The color of font selected goes well with the background.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Kyrielle.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2017
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The poem, 'Spare No Haste', is deep.
My favorite part: 'I beg you, death, please spare no haste.'- This says to the reader that one wants it done quickly. The writer wants death NOT to spare the hurry.
The artwork is awesome. The image shown supports the poem. The color of font selected goes well with the background.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Kyrielle.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 20-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Nikki. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
This is the most beautiful Kyrielle I've ever seen. You did a wonderful job. I am happy to give you my last six stars. I will look for this entry in the voting booth. Well done!
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Hello, my friend,
This is the most beautiful Kyrielle I've ever seen. You did a wonderful job. I am happy to give you my last six stars. I will look for this entry in the voting booth. Well done!
Comment Written 18-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much for the kind words and your last six, Gypsy. I dearly appreciate the gracious review. I think besides the sonnet this is the form I like next out of all of them. Have a wonderful night, G. Thank you again.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Kyrielle. When someone feel to give up on life, there is only one option left in their eyes, to be taken away from the trials and challenges of life.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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A very well-written Kyrielle. When someone feel to give up on life, there is only one option left in their eyes, to be taken away from the trials and challenges of life.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Sandra. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this dark piece.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Wow!
What an outstanding, well penned Cinquain you've managed to compose, Anonymous Poet.
Impeccable rhyming coupled with a stunning presentation.
What more can I say other than BRAVO!
Best wishes to you in the contest.
I'm so glad now after reading this I didn't enter, heh-heh...
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Wow!
What an outstanding, well penned Cinquain you've managed to compose, Anonymous Poet.
Impeccable rhyming coupled with a stunning presentation.
What more can I say other than BRAVO!
Best wishes to you in the contest.
I'm so glad now after reading this I didn't enter, heh-heh...
Comment Written 18-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Hey, Dean, hi. Thank you so much for the big sixer and fantastic review. Yeah, I'm just in one of those moods, tired of it all, lol. Go ahead and jump on in the contest. No matter how well this is written, just for the simple fact it's a downer, it's most likely not going to do too well in the booth. I can write stupid nonsense crap and get votes all day long but I write something with heart and feeling, it's goes down in flames. What can you do? So don't let this piece deter you from entering. There's still a bunch of spaces open. I really appreciate the generous rating, Dean. Thank you again. I'm glad you liked this dark piece. Have a good one.
