Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-5, Sun Kissed Summer Days, has the right set up and shows us the typical warm and pleasant moments that fade into the evening and the sounds and sights of that phase of the days enjoyment. Nice.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017

Thanks for rev iewing zanya

Comment from Taffspride

Excellent

What a beautiful story you have told in so very few words. I really enjoyed reading this poem. It is a very worthy winner.

Thanks for sharing,

Iechyd da

Ann

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017

Thanks for reading and the critique- it is such a special feeling to actually win ! zanya

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is very nice. It encapsulates the days and nights of summer. Nostalgic. Image is perfect for your words. Good word choices to describe-- sun kissed and balmy. Last line wraps it up. Marilyn

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017

Thanks for a great review zanya

Comment from Nikki-Nicole

Excellent

You've penned a good 5-7-5
I especially like the first line: 'sun kissed summer days'
I'm in Mississippi and it feels like the sun is kissing my whole body. It's so HOT out here.
The image shown captures the meaning of the poem. The background goes well with the art and color of font chosen.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your version of summer.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017

Thanks for reading and critique -enjoy that summer sun !zanya

Comment from bmethner

Exceptional

Beautifully written that so describes the days of summer. It strummed my heartstrings for I just listened to those cicadas last evening. Using so few words, it paints the picture wonderfully

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017

What an inspiring review and 6 twinkling stars-zanya

Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

Lovely, beautiful and picture perfect...
sun kissed Summer days
fade into balmy nights with
cicada nocturne
Good luck, this has a good contest chance.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017

Thanks for reading zanya