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Comment from Spitfire
Congratulations on winning. I wonder if people in pain emotionally or physically feel this way? The word "new" is the key. One must be ready to throw out baggage and pack fresh clothes.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2017
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Congratulations on winning. I wonder if people in pain emotionally or physically feel this way? The word "new" is the key. One must be ready to throw out baggage and pack fresh clothes.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2017
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from BeasPeas
I missed the contest, but see that you shared first place with others. Congratulations. This is a very good post in just a few words. Each day is a gift. We're grateful for each new day. Lovely image to go with your piece. Marilyn
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017
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I missed the contest, but see that you shared first place with others. Congratulations. This is a very good post in just a few words. Each day is a gift. We're grateful for each new day. Lovely image to go with your piece. Marilyn
Comment Written 05-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much, you added to my day.
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And you mine. :)
Comment from Beverly Botelho
This is well-done, however it is not a new sentiment. I also believe that the second line could have been worded in a more creative way. In fact I hope the poet will rework this, because the message merits a little more reflection and rewording. Good luck.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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This is well-done, however it is not a new sentiment. I also believe that the second line could have been worded in a more creative way. In fact I hope the poet will rework this, because the message merits a little more reflection and rewording. Good luck.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your review.
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With the topic being Miracle, and the syllable and line restriction, it is definitely difficult to say something new. You did a good job, though.
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
You've written a great poem.
It consists of three lines with a syllable count of 3-5-3
The words are real and true.
The image shown supports the poem. The background goes well with the art and color of font chosen.
--Yes! Every day that we wake up, it's a miracle. Many do NOT wake up. I'm glad God woke me this morning and I thank Him daily. It's a blessing!
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your poetry.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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You've written a great poem.
It consists of three lines with a syllable count of 3-5-3
The words are real and true.
The image shown supports the poem. The background goes well with the art and color of font chosen.
--Yes! Every day that we wake up, it's a miracle. Many do NOT wake up. I'm glad God woke me this morning and I thank Him daily. It's a blessing!
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your poetry.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 03-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from RodG
As one gets older, he really comes to believe the truth of your message. The follow-up should be: Now make the most of it,
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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As one gets older, he really comes to believe the truth of your message. The follow-up should be: Now make the most of it,
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from hari anand
It surely is... we sleep everyday with a hope to wake up in all our health and its miracle. lovely poem , beautiful message and picture. best of luck for the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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It surely is... we sleep everyday with a hope to wake up in all our health and its miracle. lovely poem , beautiful message and picture. best of luck for the contest.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your poem.
