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A Trump Tyburn20 total reviews
Comment from Monz1
This is a great caricature and a fairly typical portrayal of how he appears in public. Awesome action verbs.Well doneš???
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
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This is a great caricature and a fairly typical portrayal of how he appears in public. Awesome action verbs.Well doneš???
Comment Written 06-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
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Hi Monz1 Thanks for your review it gave me a second place so Thanks DT LOL. Yes his public appearance and tweets etc seem to open him up for comment Cheers Christine
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Not sure what the weird pumctuation is at the end of my review, apologies, IPad glitch.
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Hi Monz1 Not to worry I used to put emoji after my responses but apparently they turn into strange marks similar to yours LOL so I guess some Ipads dont like them Never mind a lovely comment is all that is needed Cheers Christine😃 smiley face
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Ok that will be it, emojis!!
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yes that will be it
Comment from rjuselius
haha. lol. this is an entertainig piece of poetry dear anonymous! you have done well in the polls and i think you surely deserve to.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a big squeeze!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
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haha. lol. this is an entertainig piece of poetry dear anonymous! you have done well in the polls and i think you surely deserve to.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a big squeeze!
rebekka x
Comment Written 06-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2017
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Ha Ha Rebecca thanks for your review and yes mist have struck accord with many A bit of fun he lends himself for comment Hmm Cheers and yes it got second so I am pleased Cheers Christine
Comment from Oatmeal
I have never seen this style that I remember. I may have to look it up. It looks good to me. Your flow is nice. The words you used made me smile. The arrangement is understandable and effective.
There was no SPAG, no typos, no room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017
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I have never seen this style that I remember. I may have to look it up. It looks good to me. Your flow is nice. The words you used made me smile. The arrangement is understandable and effective.
There was no SPAG, no typos, no room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 05-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017
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Hi Oatmeal, Thanks for reading my tyburn . it is a challenging style to try and get the syllables to fit in as well as finding the right words and ai am glad you had a smile when reading .This was an observation ffrom afar Cheers
Comment from Thomas Bowling
I don't know why you would call this a poem. It seems to be more of a rant than anything. There is nothing poetic about it. It's basically meaningless.
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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017
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I don't know why you would call this a poem. It seems to be more of a rant than anything. There is nothing poetic about it. It's basically meaningless.
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Comment Written 05-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017
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Hi Thomas, Thank you for revieing my 'poem' or tyburn. I am sorry it did not appeal to you and that is Ok with me as you are entitled to you opinion. It was not meant to be a rant rather than an observation that to you I have expressed badly. my apologies if I offended you. I accept all review with the good graciousness they were given . Cheers
Comment from jaded831
Excellent writing. You took a tough task and made it look easy. You hit the nail on the head with thic clever little piece. Not easy to find fault in something perfect, right down to the picture, you did a great job.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017
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Excellent writing. You took a tough task and made it look easy. You hit the nail on the head with thic clever little piece. Not easy to find fault in something perfect, right down to the picture, you did a great job.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017
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Hi jaded831. Thanks for your review and rating for my Tyburn . Ha Ha They are quite difficult to get the right 4 descriptors and then try to put into the requirement I had a bit of fun with this one as he does lend himself to satire and comment. Wait and see Hmmm Cheers
Comment from TAB_that's me
Trump (I never call him president - most of the time donald) is raging, ranting, raving mad. excellent tyburn poem and I wish you well in the contest.
teresa
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017
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Trump (I never call him president - most of the time donald) is raging, ranting, raving mad. excellent tyburn poem and I wish you well in the contest.
teresa
Comment Written 05-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017
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Hi Teresa, Thanks for your review of my tyburn and yes he does leave much to be questioned and this was my observation of recent events. Cheers for your well wishes in this contest.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hahaha, I, for one, could not agree with you more than if I had written this myself, Anonymous Poet.
Let's just hope that this Russian voter scandal thing blows up in his smug, fat face and he'll be impeached.
Best of luck in the contest, you got MY vote!
~Dean :}
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017
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Hahaha, I, for one, could not agree with you more than if I had written this myself, Anonymous Poet.
Let's just hope that this Russian voter scandal thing blows up in his smug, fat face and he'll be impeached.
Best of luck in the contest, you got MY vote!
~Dean :}
Comment Written 05-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017
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Ha Ha Dean, Glad you approve and We will wait and see. Appreciate your great support. 'Mums the word' Cheers
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Ha Ha Ha
Comment from BeasPeas
Your Tyburn form is done well. Your entry will most likely win the contest. Here on FanStory anything detrimental to Trump wins. He was elected because of his common sense. He is best thing that has happened to America in years. His tweets are a breath of fresh air. It's the only way he can reach the people directly. But he is smart and will figure it all out. He doesn't need me to defend him. Marilyn
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017
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Your Tyburn form is done well. Your entry will most likely win the contest. Here on FanStory anything detrimental to Trump wins. He was elected because of his common sense. He is best thing that has happened to America in years. His tweets are a breath of fresh air. It's the only way he can reach the people directly. But he is smart and will figure it all out. He doesn't need me to defend him. Marilyn
Comment Written 05-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017
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Hi Marilyn, Yes he certainly creates much to write about and Is different to any other president America has had. I gusee we will just have to wait and see how effective he really is. Thanks for your review Cheers
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Unfortunately he is hated so much by the opposition they will pan anything he will attempt to do, even though the rank and file majority are for him and his policies. As they say, politics is a dirty game. We desperately need politician's term limits (serve 2 only then get out and go back to being a citizen). Our founding fathers never intended politics to be a lifetime job of 30-40 years.
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
You've written a great poem.
I find it funny, entertaining and true.
--That's our President, and he's always on twitter.
The image shown is a perfect example of the topic discussed. The background goes well with the image and color of font chosen. It also goes great with the President's hair.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Tyburn.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017
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You've written a great poem.
I find it funny, entertaining and true.
--That's our President, and he's always on twitter.
The image shown is a perfect example of the topic discussed. The background goes well with the image and color of font chosen. It also goes great with the President's hair.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Tyburn.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 05-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017
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Hi Nicole, Thanks for your review and best wishes for my Tyburn. He certainly provides the entertainment LOL Cheers
Comment from seaglass
You have fit your message into the required six line poem requirements. And its clears, just as his tweets, that we have a duffus, corrupt, maniac for president. God help us. Takes some of the bank out of Independence Day for me.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017
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You have fit your message into the required six line poem requirements. And its clears, just as his tweets, that we have a duffus, corrupt, maniac for president. God help us. Takes some of the bank out of Independence Day for me.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017
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Hi Seaglass, Thanks for your review and I just couldn't resist this one he does lend himself for some satire or ridicule. May need more than God. Cheers
