The Twilight Zone!
My shitty past life.18 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
wow what a rendition of memories and times that would shake the foundation of the strongest of wills.
Very different piece of writing but stressed very well and partially understood
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2017
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wow what a rendition of memories and times that would shake the foundation of the strongest of wills.
Very different piece of writing but stressed very well and partially understood
Comment Written 30-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2017
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Thanks Miss Hensongispsaca,
{Is that just your writing name?}
"But, you reviewed one of my more serious pieces.
I do write children's stories which are beautiful.
Want to follow each other?
Ricky1024
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No the last letters are my intials of my cats names.lol
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Here are mine'''
"Garfield" a big Tabby I rescued a few years ago from the shelter...
"Miss Katherine Onyx aka {Knock Out!}
"And the "Twin Créme Sickles"
"Clementine or {Clemmy}
And this ones the best!
"Yoxi-Mushi or in the Czech Language
'Hello.'
Or a 'Hello kitty!'
Ricky...
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I have three rescue cats
Squeek cant meow because kids tried to hang her. she is a long haired golden.
Bubba was kept in a small cage for his first 9 months, now he runs all the time. He is a short hair tortoise shell.
Cali is a little calico who was thrown from a moving car.
Comment from Hitcher
Sounds like you have been to Hell and back way too many times friend. No wonder your life feels like an episode of The Twilight Zone. I'm amazed you still with us in mind body and soul Ricky... few would have survived such fatal wounds... strength to you mate!!
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2017
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Sounds like you have been to Hell and back way too many times friend. No wonder your life feels like an episode of The Twilight Zone. I'm amazed you still with us in mind body and soul Ricky... few would have survived such fatal wounds... strength to you mate!!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2017
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Thanks Hitcher and yes...
"You will go to...
HELL!!!
Ricky1024
Comment from Dean Kuch
I believe I know the lady depicted in your accompanying artwork (well, in all fairness it's actually MK Flood's artwork), Ricky1024. She looks an awful lot like my aunt Wilhelmina Boggins.
"There is a fifth dimension beyond that which is known to man. It is a dimension as vast as space and as timeless as infinity. It is the middle ground between light and shadow, between science and superstition, and it lies between the pit of man's fears and the summit of his knowledge. You're traveling through that dimension now, a dimension not only of sight and sound but of mind. A journey into a wondrous land whose boundaries are that of the imagination. That's the signpost up ahead - your next stop...the Twilight Zone!"
~Dean
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2017
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I believe I know the lady depicted in your accompanying artwork (well, in all fairness it's actually MK Flood's artwork), Ricky1024. She looks an awful lot like my aunt Wilhelmina Boggins.
"There is a fifth dimension beyond that which is known to man. It is a dimension as vast as space and as timeless as infinity. It is the middle ground between light and shadow, between science and superstition, and it lies between the pit of man's fears and the summit of his knowledge. You're traveling through that dimension now, a dimension not only of sight and sound but of mind. A journey into a wondrous land whose boundaries are that of the imagination. That's the signpost up ahead - your next stop...the Twilight Zone!"
~Dean
Comment Written 29-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2017
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Thanks Dean kept this hanging awhile...
"Like the Song!"
Dr. Ricky 1024.
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My pleasure as always, Ricky!
Comment from Thomas Bowling
You have certainly had a life of tragedy. My heart goes out to. I had no idea that you suffered through so many bad experiences. May God be with you. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
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You have certainly had a life of tragedy. My heart goes out to. I had no idea that you suffered through so many bad experiences. May God be with you. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
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Thanks Thomas but others have had it...
Far worse.
"After a 'Nervous breakdown,' the system called...
"Your Central Intelligence Agency," slows down incredibly to protect the Human Being that was running like an engine ...
"OUT OF CONTROL!"
"Firstly, the spark plugs which normally fire off like...
Tat, Tat, Tat, Tat, Tat...
'Now go...
tat....tat....tat....tat....
"You can no longer function or it takes ten, times, longer...
{Like buttoning a shirt}
'TV?'
"Which you used to enjoy?'"
"Now, you can't understand and follow?"
"Well lets just say, your mind now is trapped in 'The Twilight Zone!"
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"And, there ain't no coming back soon!"
"Each time...
{In 1983 and 1993}
"I went on State Disability for six months."
"In 1983, I was medicated for three weeks in "Rosa' at Jersey Shore Hospital...
"Neptune, New Jersey.'
" I was so 'Fucked up,' I thought a patient was a girlfriend that I loved and broke up with!!"
"'The medication 'Haldol" stiffened up all my muscles as if I was slowing turning into a robot~!"
"The doctor I saw, when I got out, and gave me a shot of 'Tofrinal' and resolved that.'
...
'I couldn't go to the bathroom for three weeks and that had to be addressed there."
"In 1993, the same thing .....
"They put me on some new Anti-pschocotic that was a liquid and taken orally with a cup of juice to drink afterwards...
"The med again reacted negatively on me...
'"When my wife came to visit, she walked past me asking for me?"
"The nurse said he is right there waiting for you."
"When she saw me I was so distorted...
{Facial muscles froze}
"That she yelled at them!"
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"Toady's facilities are so advanced...
"No smoking. TV works instead of blinks, plumbing works, ect.
"In Australia, I was told they had a movie theater and a place to go for a massage!"
"In Saint Barnabas Correctional Facility, in Toms River, NJ. When you first go in, your on...
'Suicide Watch' for 24 hours...
"After words, if you attend all 'Goal Meetings' and participate, take the meds, talk to your shrink and Social Worker...
"You attain 'Level Two' and get to eat at the cafeteria where they have real coffee, soda, ice cream, and all the things that you can't have at 'Level One.'
{Usually takes ten to fourteen days and then you are released..
{If you have a place to go}
'If not and they can't place you...
"It's off to Ancora!"
{The State Hospital for serious patients} and you are in big trouble!"
'You could be put in an {unheated Cottage] "and, contained for months or even years...
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"The laws changed in Jersey, and the most they can give you ins three years...
'People lost houses to the State to pay for the 'privilege?'
"To be contained!'
Thanks,
Ricky1024 and be well my friend and drink beer!"
"There could be a 'Popping Feeling' in the brain and a noise like 'A high , pitched Ringing!
Thanks Thomas but others...
'Far worst...
Ricky1024.
Comment from Oatmeal
Ricky,
The arrangement is fine, smoothly readable and understandable. Chosen explanations are made very clear and descriptive. Created impressions through the descriptions are vivid, forceful and making the reader think about it.
I saw no SPAG and no typos. It was very clean.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
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Ricky,
The arrangement is fine, smoothly readable and understandable. Chosen explanations are made very clear and descriptive. Created impressions through the descriptions are vivid, forceful and making the reader think about it.
I saw no SPAG and no typos. It was very clean.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 28-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
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Thanks Miss Oatmeal and I love Oatmeal but it has to be hot...
"Sweet...
"And tasty!!!
"Are you?
LOL!
Sorry but hope this starts your day?
Ricky1024.
Comment from Nika2016
Wow Ricky..you did great with this....and the progress..fantastic...
I am so glad that things are getting better for you.
Keep the faith...there's more to come in life...
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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Wow Ricky..you did great with this....and the progress..fantastic...
I am so glad that things are getting better for you.
Keep the faith...there's more to come in life...
Comment Written 28-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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Why thanks Miss Nika.
"Do you know any, female, writers that can help me achieve...
'The Feeling Better Thing cause I'm still waiting for that Angel that God promised me in '03?"
Ricky1024
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Sounds like ISIS and the Seven Virgins...Other guys at Fan Story say they have been promised the same thing...God is playing Cupid?
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Sounds like ISIS and the Seven Virgins...Other guys at Fan Story say they have been promised the same thing...God is playing Cupid?
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Sounds like ISIS and the Seven Virgins...Other guys at Fan Story say they have been promised the same thing...God is playing Cupid?
Comment from Mustang Patty
I am so glad to know that you have a deep foundation in God. You have gone through a lot, but I'm sure you know He is with you and will continue to help you move on,
~patty~
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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I am so glad to know that you have a deep foundation in God. You have gone through a lot, but I'm sure you know He is with you and will continue to help you move on,
~patty~
Comment Written 28-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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"I had to find something deeper...
"With more meaning then what was readily available."
"The Latter Day saint Church of Jesus Christ, seems to help but...
"That's only one Band-Aid on the wound...
'This is doing rather well...
"There is another by the way...
"The Twilight Zone of my Life?'
Thanks,
Ricky1024.
Comment from estory
I think you did a great job expressing all the frustrations and anxiety of dealing with all these problems. the language was very emotional. I think all the repeating phrases and scenes built up the frustration, the feeling that we can't escape from these feelings, these events. estory
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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I think you did a great job expressing all the frustrations and anxiety of dealing with all these problems. the language was very emotional. I think all the repeating phrases and scenes built up the frustration, the feeling that we can't escape from these feelings, these events. estory
Comment Written 28-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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"Thanks 'estory.'
"A nervous break down from work is one thing...
"But, from an Unexpected Event that you can't control...
R icky1024.
Comment from c_lucas
A few errors which is not usually you. I choose poetic license. Dreaming and scheming wondering where I am. Why is Rod Sterling using my recliner. Take on day at a time and the hell with the rhyme.
Errors
There/they
Rod...there/here
"If you know someone suffering, teach (reach) out and call 9-11 immediately."
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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A few errors which is not usually you. I choose poetic license. Dreaming and scheming wondering where I am. Why is Rod Sterling using my recliner. Take on day at a time and the hell with the rhyme.
Errors
There/they
Rod...there/here
"If you know someone suffering, teach (reach) out and call 9-11 immediately."
Comment Written 28-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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Rod's in Your recliner Charlie because He wants to be Comfortable watching Matt Dillon in 'Gun Smoke!'
James Arness ..
{Bless His Soul}
"Actually tells you to stay tuned after Twilight Zone!"
"Cleaned this up a bit and it's doing rather well...
Thanks,
Miss Kitty!!!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about being in a Twilight zone. We all find ourselves there one time or another. It is at its worst when we feel alone with no one around to talk about our fears
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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A very well-written poem about being in a Twilight zone. We all find ourselves there one time or another. It is at its worst when we feel alone with no one around to talk about our fears
Comment Written 28-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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Truer words never said...
An earlier reviewer had the nerve to call a Mental Institution a 'Lonnie Bin!'
Grammar issue not criticized...
Ricky1024
