The Many Wonders of Thee
My thoughts on Jay.27 total reviews
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing your timed poem about your feelings for Jay. I'm sure there are always thoughts of him swirling in your mind. Losing a child is never something someone can 'get over.'
~patty~
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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thank you for sharing your timed poem about your feelings for Jay. I'm sure there are always thoughts of him swirling in your mind. Losing a child is never something someone can 'get over.'
~patty~
Comment Written 28-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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Hi Again dear!
"'This one is doing amazing and I expect to receive an...
'All Times Best" soon!
Thanks again,
Ricky....
Comment from southernyankeespeaks
Your very touching poem reveals your vulnerability. To lose a child is to lose part of yourself. Through your benevolence, part of Jay will live on in others. But the most important part - your memories, will live in you forever.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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Your very touching poem reveals your vulnerability. To lose a child is to lose part of yourself. Through your benevolence, part of Jay will live on in others. But the most important part - your memories, will live in you forever.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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Thanks for your kind thoughts and review.
"Only need two more for "All Time Best.'
Ricky1024.
Comment from kathleenspalding
Beautiful and heartbreaking poems are lovely tributes to the wonderful person Jay always was and remains in the hearts and memories of those who knew him. Holy Crackle Way - too cute! May the love and good memories give you Peace.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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Beautiful and heartbreaking poems are lovely tributes to the wonderful person Jay always was and remains in the hearts and memories of those who knew him. Holy Crackle Way - too cute! May the love and good memories give you Peace.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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"What do you surmise 'Holy Crackle'
"Means from a one and a half year old?'
"Thanks this should hit
"All Time Best'
Today...
Ricky1024.r
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It's a mystery, LOL! My husband's sister was famous in the family for asking what "Sprinkle Shenolium" meant when she was little - It was "It's been good to know you" from the song - "So long, it's been good to know you." Her mom figured it out when she sang the tune. Little kids are so much fun that way! All the best.
Comment from loismddavis
Such a heartfelt memorial from a father to his son. You have expressed in a very deep way your feelings ab out your son and your grieving--it is just so unnatural for our children to be taken from us--we always expect to go first. I feel your pain.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
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Such a heartfelt memorial from a father to his son. You have expressed in a very deep way your feelings ab out your son and your grieving--it is just so unnatural for our children to be taken from us--we always expect to go first. I feel your pain.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
this would have to be the most common comment. The loss of a child...
'no matter the age...
"no matter the sex...
"Is a sin sponsored by Fate and Destiny...
Thanks Lois and feel free to read more happy pieces...
Ricky1024
Comment from Hamiel
"Only once in your life, I truly believe, you find someone who can completely turn your world around. You tell them things that you've never shared with another soul and they absorb everything you say and actually want to hear more. Carry on. Life is wonderful.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
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"Only once in your life, I truly believe, you find someone who can completely turn your world around. You tell them things that you've never shared with another soul and they absorb everything you say and actually want to hear more. Carry on. Life is wonderful.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
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Correct Hamiel...
Life is what you make of it so...
"Just don't bake that cake of HATE...
"Eat the MOTHER F***** too!
Ricky1024.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks in a spiritual tone about Jay and about his so many wonders in daily course of activities in exaltation in remembrance of loved Jay the Little Man; I liked.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
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This speaks in a spiritual tone about Jay and about his so many wonders in daily course of activities in exaltation in remembrance of loved Jay the Little Man; I liked.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
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Thanks so much Alcreator.
Always a pleasure.
Ricky1024
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Well written tribute to "Jay".
One he would no doubt appreciate you taking the time to express.
The loss of someone close to you is never an easy experience, and as this poem indicates, it never ceases with time. No matter how much time passes by.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
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Well written tribute to "Jay".
One he would no doubt appreciate you taking the time to express.
The loss of someone close to you is never an easy experience, and as this poem indicates, it never ceases with time. No matter how much time passes by.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
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Thanks Brett.
It only needs a few more for...
"All Time Best."
Ricky1024.
Comment from kriver
Hi Ricky,
I am so sorry for your loss
Now jay is up there playing for all he's worth
in the Super Angel's band
I bet they sound great too
That was a very generous thing for all of you to do.
Anyways very good write
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
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Hi Ricky,
I am so sorry for your loss
Now jay is up there playing for all he's worth
in the Super Angel's band
I bet they sound great too
That was a very generous thing for all of you to do.
Anyways very good write
Comment Written 26-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
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Thanks so much and I sent you message!
Ricky1024,.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Ricky,
You did a super job putting your thoughts/feelings/heart into this poem in just 7 minutes. It flows well & tells so much of Jason. I enjoyed that part. I am sorry for your loss. Thank you for sharing such a personal poem. Jan
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Ricky,
You did a super job putting your thoughts/feelings/heart into this poem in just 7 minutes. It flows well & tells so much of Jason. I enjoyed that part. I am sorry for your loss. Thank you for sharing such a personal poem. Jan
Comment Written 25-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Losing ant family member as a teenager is devastating.
It takes years to just get yourself together...
never the same ...
always searching...
Thanks,
Ricky1024
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I don't know how I would be able to deal with a pain such as you have to live with, it is worse than any physical pain you could have. Writing helps, but it's like putting a small plaster on a leg amputation, it isn't enough. I hope one day you will find peace. In the meantime, keep these poems coming, small plasters are betting than nothing. Big hugs, my friend. xxx Sandra
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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I don't know how I would be able to deal with a pain such as you have to live with, it is worse than any physical pain you could have. Writing helps, but it's like putting a small plaster on a leg amputation, it isn't enough. I hope one day you will find peace. In the meantime, keep these poems coming, small plasters are betting than nothing. Big hugs, my friend. xxx Sandra
Comment Written 25-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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How?
Read my next piece called "The Rose Anthology"
a little later this evening.
Thanks Sandra...
As always yours...
Ricky...
