Haiku Club Challenges, Book II
Viewing comments for Prologue "haiku (sick tree reaches)"an anthology of haiku written by fanstory poets
18 total reviews
Comment from Grasshopper2
GBR,
Six stars for the use of the word clemency as well as the Haiku Anthology plug. Way to go Lady Blue! The image you paint works perfectly with your choice of words. Most enjoyable read.
Grasshopper
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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GBR,
Six stars for the use of the word clemency as well as the Haiku Anthology plug. Way to go Lady Blue! The image you paint works perfectly with your choice of words. Most enjoyable read.
Grasshopper
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review and the six stars, my friend. :)
Gypsy
Comment from Eternal Muse
I am just totally blown away by the beauty of this haiku. You are the master, and this is no exception. The words brought tears to my eyes. Stunning satori "clemency" in the last line.
Bravo!
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017
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I am just totally blown away by the beauty of this haiku. You are the master, and this is no exception. The words brought tears to my eyes. Stunning satori "clemency" in the last line.
Bravo!
Comment Written 20-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review and the kind words. Thank you for the six stars.... that is very generous of you.
Gypsy
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend this is well written again I love the use of the word clemency in the closing choice of picture works very well I will start looking for your haiku club challenges if I may don't know if I am good enough yet well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Yes my friend this is well written again I love the use of the word clemency in the closing choice of picture works very well I will start looking for your haiku club challenges if I may don't know if I am good enough yet well done regards Jill
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Gypsy Read you notes about what you call a haiku Club(question can any member of FS join this club or do I need have a lot of knowledge (of haiku) or money to join?
Now your haiku about the sick tree
I just wonder who or what is going
:to have mercy or show no mercy .
Gert:
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Hello Gypsy Read you notes about what you call a haiku Club(question can any member of FS join this club or do I need have a lot of knowledge (of haiku) or money to join?
Now your haiku about the sick tree
I just wonder who or what is going
:to have mercy or show no mercy .
Gert:
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Hello, Gert, God or the light has mercy on all sentient beings. The Haiku Club is 100 % free and open to everyone, you don't need any experience.
Thank you very much for the lovely review, you are very kind.
Gypsy
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Thank you Gypsy for you innovation,
and you are welcome for my comment.
Gert
PS. what do I need to do to join the haiku club?
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I sent you a private message :)
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Thank you so much Gypsy
Gert
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You are welcome :)
Comment from lalajovanoski
Hello again dear friend I really enjoyed this Haiku I found it to be very interesting and there's a good word selection there's some emotions that I have felt through Reading thank you very much for sharing this and God bless you
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Hello again dear friend I really enjoyed this Haiku I found it to be very interesting and there's a good word selection there's some emotions that I have felt through Reading thank you very much for sharing this and God bless you
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much for the lovely review, you are very kind.
Gypsy
Comment from Mark Schardine
A bright light to close out the day can heal am illness. This saving act at the last moment will have effects we will notice for a long time.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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A bright light to close out the day can heal am illness. This saving act at the last moment will have effects we will notice for a long time.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing, my friend.
Gypsy
Comment from l.raven
HI Gypsy, this reminds of the black spot my Roses us to get...they would reach for the sky for that last touch of sun...very well written Queen of Haiku...good to see you sweet girl...I hope all is well with you...love your poem...love you ...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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HI Gypsy, this reminds of the black spot my Roses us to get...they would reach for the sky for that last touch of sun...very well written Queen of Haiku...good to see you sweet girl...I hope all is well with you...love your poem...love you ...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing, my friend. Luv ya, sweetie pie.
Gypsy
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love ya too...and you are sooooo welcome...xxoo Linda
Comment from rjuselius
"sick tree reaches
for the last light of day--
clemency"
this is a beautiful piece of poetry dear gypsy! i love the satori and the two interconnected lines. the second line is my favorite.
thank you for sharing!
blessings and a big squeeze!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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"sick tree reaches
for the last light of day--
clemency"
this is a beautiful piece of poetry dear gypsy! i love the satori and the two interconnected lines. the second line is my favorite.
thank you for sharing!
blessings and a big squeeze!
rebekka x
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Thank you, Rebekka, you are very kind.
Gypsy
Comment from apky
You evoked some pathos here, making the reader (at least me) feel with the sick tree. And then wonder if the sickness was caused by us, humans, with our abominable consumption and polution of a healthy environment that the tree needs.
Well, these are the ramblings of a wanna-be poet.
Cheers,
Apky
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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You evoked some pathos here, making the reader (at least me) feel with the sick tree. And then wonder if the sickness was caused by us, humans, with our abominable consumption and polution of a healthy environment that the tree needs.
Well, these are the ramblings of a wanna-be poet.
Cheers,
Apky
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Thank you, Mitchell, you are very kind. Cheers.
Gypsy
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Gipsy, may I ask why you call me Mitchell? This is the second time you've done it, lol!
Cheers,
Apky
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It's not your name? Oh my God! Dean told me it was. Maybe I misunderstood. I'm so sorry. It won't happen again.
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No problem. My name is Akinyi (Morning Child) and you can shorten it to Aki or Akin.
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Nice to meet you. Beautiful name. My name is MariVal means Mary of the Valley but I go by gypsy. :)
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Gypsy, Well done I like this Haiku it really portrays how the sick tree in a last ditch effort tries to grasp the last light to stay alive ( black spot) kils a lot of trees and plants. I thought clemency was a great Satori. ( I have ordered the anthology and look forward to getting my copies) Book two on the way by the looks of it. Cheers Christineð???ð???
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Hi Gypsy, Well done I like this Haiku it really portrays how the sick tree in a last ditch effort tries to grasp the last light to stay alive ( black spot) kils a lot of trees and plants. I thought clemency was a great Satori. ( I have ordered the anthology and look forward to getting my copies) Book two on the way by the looks of it. Cheers Christineð???ð???
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Thank you, Christine, you are very kind. Cheers.
Gypsy
