Morning Calm
3/5/3 contest13 total reviews
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your 3-5-3 poem "Morning Calm". You had all your lines and syllables correct.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2017
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I enjoyed reading your 3-5-3 poem "Morning Calm". You had all your lines and syllables correct.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 3-5-3 poem. The early morning sun is always a blessing to see it shining so bright on the fields, and we can know we have another chance to be around with our family.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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A very well-written 3-5-3 poem. The early morning sun is always a blessing to see it shining so bright on the fields, and we can know we have another chance to be around with our family.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2017
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Very true. Thank you for the lovely review.
Comment from Irish Rain
Yes, always such beautiful harmony in nature. And some of the colors, so totally outrageous....yet...it all works toward beauty. This is a lovely entry, blessings....
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
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Yes, always such beautiful harmony in nature. And some of the colors, so totally outrageous....yet...it all works toward beauty. This is a lovely entry, blessings....
Comment Written 08-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review
Comment from MNOEL
Nicely done 3-5-3.
I could picture this vividly. You did a great job providing very descriptive imagery utilizing few words.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
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Nicely done 3-5-3.
I could picture this vividly. You did a great job providing very descriptive imagery utilizing few words.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a wonderful 3-5-3, Yours, out of all here have the seperation of the satori as it should be. I love the serene feeling it possesses. Good luck. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
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This is a wonderful 3-5-3, Yours, out of all here have the seperation of the satori as it should be. I love the serene feeling it possesses. Good luck. ~Kerry
Comment Written 08-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review, Kerry.
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You are very welcome. I did vote for you. :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Morning Calm, has the correct set up, but this artwork chosen makes me think I'm seeing a forest fire on the horizon.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
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This 3-5-3, Morning Calm, has the correct set up, but this artwork chosen makes me think I'm seeing a forest fire on the horizon.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
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It could be a forest fire but it looks like a sunrise, also. Thank you for the review.
Comment from rspoet
This is a fine 3-5-3 poem for the contest
With excellent imagery and connection
in the orb/evergreens
Nature's harmony
Excellent picture to match
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2017
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This is a fine 3-5-3 poem for the contest
With excellent imagery and connection
in the orb/evergreens
Nature's harmony
Excellent picture to match
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 07-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2017
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Thank you for this lovely review.
Comment from MaggieF
Great picture.You paint a beautiful picture with your words.Early morning sun on evergreens makes a cosy picture. Love the idea of 'harmony' between sun and tree, mother nature at her best. MaggieF
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2017
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Great picture.You paint a beautiful picture with your words.Early morning sun on evergreens makes a cosy picture. Love the idea of 'harmony' between sun and tree, mother nature at her best. MaggieF
Comment Written 07-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2017
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Thank you, Maggie. I love the word "cozy" This is just a really lovely review.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 3-5-3 poem for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2017
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This is a very well written 3-5-3 poem for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 07-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
You've written a nice little poem.
It consists of three lines with a syllable count: 3-5-3
I can clearly see that this piece follows the guidelines of the contest and makes a good entry.
The image shown supports the poem. The background goes well with the art and color of font chosen.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your poetry.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2017
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You've written a nice little poem.
It consists of three lines with a syllable count: 3-5-3
I can clearly see that this piece follows the guidelines of the contest and makes a good entry.
The image shown supports the poem. The background goes well with the art and color of font chosen.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your poetry.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 07-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2017
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This is an excellent review, and appreciate the time and patience you took to writhe it. A thoughtful review on this site is far from the norm. Thank you.
