Wishing I Could Be A Palomino
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Comment from lalajovanoski
Hello there I really enjoyed reading this animals poem I think that it is a good entry for the contest and it will do well I like the 3rd and the 5th stanzas the best very descriptive and thank you very much for sharing this good luck
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2017
Hello there I really enjoyed reading this animals poem I think that it is a good entry for the contest and it will do well I like the 3rd and the 5th stanzas the best very descriptive and thank you very much for sharing this good luck
Comment Written 16-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2017
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Thank you for caring and sharing your thoughts with me and your love of horses too
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You created a great tribute here for an animal you love with a dreamy and romantic view. I could picture the Palomino horse running free, beautiful, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2017
You created a great tribute here for an animal you love with a dreamy and romantic view. I could picture the Palomino horse running free, beautiful, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2017
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Thank you so much for your kindness and support,I see I am not the only softie around
Comment from jaded831
Unusual rhyme scheme. Your poem flows like the mane on the palomino. I myself would like to be a panther, sleek and strong. Quick to pounce and light on my feet. So I can relate to your poem, cause I also dream of what I would like to be.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
Unusual rhyme scheme. Your poem flows like the mane on the palomino. I myself would like to be a panther, sleek and strong. Quick to pounce and light on my feet. So I can relate to your poem, cause I also dream of what I would like to be.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
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Such kindness and thank you for your support
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Streaking across the meadows, Palomino comes, over thundering mountain terrain
Dreams can come true and So beautiful, her mane flows into the wind as it rains
Running, running, so beautiful! I have this picture running through my head. My Palomino of my dreams, whispers my name, wild child, is her name, wild child is here to stay. Dreams can come true. '
A beautiful emotive poem, well done, Meia x
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
Streaking across the meadows, Palomino comes, over thundering mountain terrain
Dreams can come true and So beautiful, her mane flows into the wind as it rains
Running, running, so beautiful! I have this picture running through my head. My Palomino of my dreams, whispers my name, wild child, is her name, wild child is here to stay. Dreams can come true. '
A beautiful emotive poem, well done, Meia x
Comment Written 15-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
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Thank you so much for your kindness and support
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about animals. A Palomino is what you like to be. Wild and free running over the meadow with long golden mane blowing in the wind.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2017
A very well-written poem about animals. A Palomino is what you like to be. Wild and free running over the meadow with long golden mane blowing in the wind.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2017
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Yep that's me
Comment from Mistydawn
I love your poem, it's so sweet, heartfelt a great insight to many people in the world. Your absolutely right with a lot of hard work and determination, dreams do come true. I read something on twitter today that fits perfectly. Wild children are the ones who'll change the world if they don't let the world break them. It's true because they are the ones who don't obey rules, follow in everyone's path. They push boundaries set their own limits, try to make the world better. Great poem.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2017
I love your poem, it's so sweet, heartfelt a great insight to many people in the world. Your absolutely right with a lot of hard work and determination, dreams do come true. I read something on twitter today that fits perfectly. Wild children are the ones who'll change the world if they don't let the world break them. It's true because they are the ones who don't obey rules, follow in everyone's path. They push boundaries set their own limits, try to make the world better. Great poem.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2017
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So glad you this so much
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. I believe I read this poem in the voting booth. It is well written and the artwork is perfect for the subject of your poem. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2017
Excellent. I believe I read this poem in the voting booth. It is well written and the artwork is perfect for the subject of your poem. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2017
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Thank you so much
Comment from Ricky1024
Animals Writing Prompt Entree?
Abby that writes here loves horses.
She would love this.
Friend her.
Anyway...
Nice theme worked well with imagery...
Adjective content was superior and objective content was excellent.
Thanks,
Ricky 1024.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2017
Animals Writing Prompt Entree?
Abby that writes here loves horses.
She would love this.
Friend her.
Anyway...
Nice theme worked well with imagery...
Adjective content was superior and objective content was excellent.
Thanks,
Ricky 1024.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2017
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So glad you enjoyed this
Comment from Curly Girly
Palaminos are horses, as you already know, with a white mane and tail. Their bodies can be chestnut or a pale creamy colour. They are famous for their appealing colour. I think every young horsewoman that ever lived wanted a palomino pony.
A fun read.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2017
Palaminos are horses, as you already know, with a white mane and tail. Their bodies can be chestnut or a pale creamy colour. They are famous for their appealing colour. I think every young horsewoman that ever lived wanted a palomino pony.
A fun read.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2017
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so glad you enjoyed
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing this moving piece about the wish to be a palomino. They are beautiful horses, and I can see why you would wish to be one. The lines of your poem flow well, and you've described the scene beautifully,
~patty~
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2017
thank you for sharing this moving piece about the wish to be a palomino. They are beautiful horses, and I can see why you would wish to be one. The lines of your poem flow well, and you've described the scene beautifully,
~patty~
Comment Written 06-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2017
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Thank you for being able to see and feel my emotions where the horses are concerned.