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Crappy day

5-7-5 contest

11 total reviews 
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Hi Kerry, HA HA HA! Great punch line and isn't it the truth? I can never think of a great punch line, I think try is another of those useless words that I'm accumulating too, lol. Fantastic humor here. Loved it! xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2017
    I'm glad you liked it, Thanks. lol
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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haha you are right. Good job on the style of the 5-7-5. This gave me a laugh. I thought about all the times my kitties have unwound new rolls & made a mess. Best wishes in the contest. Jan

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
    lol, Thanks Jan
Comment from thonnigford09
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LOL. Hate that too. Well, hope you had more on hand. :):) toilet paper that is:):) excellent poem for the contest hope you do well. I would recommend this. Thanks, Theresa.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
    lol, thank you Theresa.
reply by thonnigford09 on 09-Jun-2017
    😊
Comment from Bill Schott
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This humorous 5-7-5, Crappy Day, has the required syllables in the correct places. It also wipes away any doubt that the job isn't over until the paperwork is done. Nice job with this.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 07-Jun-2017
    lol, Bill, that's hilarious, ha-ha-heh-heh, that was good. Thanks
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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This reminds of Bill Shott's crappy poem. This is a terrific contest entry. Good luck in the contest. I wish you the best. I hope you do well.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
    LOL, Thank you, Tom.
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Oh, you bet it does!
And when it does, it's best to be prepared.
This is a great poetic admonition to ALWAYS and without fail to be sure to check to see how much TP is on the roll before your sit down to do your "business."
You're performing a fantastic public service here, Anonymous Poet, and we, as faithful readers, reviewers and fellow Fanstorians should thank you for it.
Good luck!
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~Dean

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
    Lol, thank you Dean, that's hilarious, heh-heh-he
reply by Dean Kuch on 06-Jun-2017
    So was your poem, LOL.
    You're very welcome, and good luck!
    ~Dean ;)
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
    Thanks, lol
Comment from Mustangpatty1029
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LOL! Well, this certainly fits the prompt for a humorous 5-7-5. I had to love it - nothing worse than getting caught in the bathroom when you're out of toilet paper.

Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest,
~patty~

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
    Thank you Patty,I appreciate it.
Comment from MaggieF
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Great picture. Ha ha, this did make me laugh out loud. Seriously though don't you just hate it when that happens, especially in a public toilet. MaggieF

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
    Omg yes Maggie, lol thanks for the review
Comment from rjuselius
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this is a hilarious piece of poetry dear anonymous! i love the last line, what a humorous punch! excellent my friend.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
    Thank you so much Rebekka for your kind review.
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

I guess that truly qualifies as a shitty day, although I always check first... Wouldn't want to end up like Captain Kirk... battling those Klingons.

All the best
GMG

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 Comment Written 05-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
    Lol, thank you my friend