The Enchanted Forest
Child's Acrostic16 total reviews
Comment from frierajac
Thank you for posting a charming story for the Acrostic contest. May you have good luck and the little people be with you. Especially the ones all adorned in green.
I like the way it concludes with nature winning.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Thank you for posting a charming story for the Acrostic contest. May you have good luck and the little people be with you. Especially the ones all adorned in green.
I like the way it concludes with nature winning.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Thank you ! You honor me with your great review. I'm glad you enjoyed reading my poem.
Trisha
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your acrostic poem "The Enchanted Forest.
All your lines were correct for this genre and you chose a beautiful picture,
Best of luck.
marybell1.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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I enjoyed reading your acrostic poem "The Enchanted Forest.
All your lines were correct for this genre and you chose a beautiful picture,
Best of luck.
marybell1.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Thank you Marybell . Your reviews are always appreciated.
Virtual hug
Trisha
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Children will enjoy this poem about elves and forests.
What would you do with an elf if you really did catch one?
That would make an interesting proposal.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2017
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Children will enjoy this poem about elves and forests.
What would you do with an elf if you really did catch one?
That would make an interesting proposal.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2017
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I would enjoy its beauty, and write a poem.............hmm, there's a thought. Thanks Brett, your review was appreciated and woke up the think tank (LOL)
Comment from sunao
This is a beautiful poem which made me have beautiful feelings. Thank you so much for sharing. I hope that you continue to write more of these. Please keep up the good work and good luck on the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2017
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This is a beautiful poem which made me have beautiful feelings. Thank you so much for sharing. I hope that you continue to write more of these. Please keep up the good work and good luck on the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2017
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Gooo morning Sunao, thank you so much for reviewing.and your encouragement. I'm so glad it is emotionally pleasing to you.
Virtual hugs
Trisha
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Thank you and your welcome!
Comment from lalajovanoski
Hello friend, I really enjoyed reading this beautifully written poem. I like the rhyming scheme throughout. Alliteration is very good. I think that this will do well in the contest. Good luck to you I wish you the best. Thank you very much for sharing this. God bless you. With love, la
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2017
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Hello friend, I really enjoyed reading this beautifully written poem. I like the rhyming scheme throughout. Alliteration is very good. I think that this will do well in the contest. Good luck to you I wish you the best. Thank you very much for sharing this. God bless you. With love, la
Comment Written 01-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2017
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Hi, lala
I love your name! I write for the hopeful pleasure of readers. Contests just challenge style choices for me. I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem.thanks for a great review.
Hugs, Trisha
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Hi, lala
I love your name! I write for the hopeful pleasure of readers. Contests just challenge style choices for me. I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem.thanks for a great review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is a terrific contest entry. Good luck in the contest. I wish you the best. You have chosen a beautiful picture to accompany your poem.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
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This is a terrific contest entry. Good luck in the contest. I wish you the best. You have chosen a beautiful picture to accompany your poem.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
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I thank you so much Thomas for your wonderfully encouraging review. Im glad that you enjoyed reading it.
Comment from J. Salvatore
Very well done. You paint a vivid picture I especially liked, "Else hide and play tag
Down in fallen leaves." I also liked the way you made fairies part of nature's balance at the end. Nice job!
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
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Very well done. You paint a vivid picture I especially liked, "Else hide and play tag
Down in fallen leaves." I also liked the way you made fairies part of nature's balance at the end. Nice job!
Comment Written 06-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
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Thanks so much. As long as the reader gets good imagery and enjoys .the poem, I met my goal. Your positive review is appreciated.
Comment from sharonlshelley
Nice work well written and interesting to read I am quite new to this site so I am writing and reading as I am going enjoying peoples work I find all varieties of poetry interesting
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
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Nice work well written and interesting to read I am quite new to this site so I am writing and reading as I am going enjoying peoples work I find all varieties of poetry interesting
Comment Written 06-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
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Welcome! Yes, this is the place for all kinds of talent and interest. I write whatever comes to mind. Thank you so much for writing a review. I hope to read some of penning soon.
Comment from lyenochka
A delightful picture of an enchanted forest is depicted in this well written acrostic poem! I especially liked that the fairies laughing and shaking the pollen from the flowers like sprinkling magical dust.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
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A delightful picture of an enchanted forest is depicted in this well written acrostic poem! I especially liked that the fairies laughing and shaking the pollen from the flowers like sprinkling magical dust.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
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Thanks for your lovely review! I am so glad you enjoyed the acrostic style
Trisha
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Hello Trish:
I am laughing at your Author notes. I know I have yet to use the advanced editor. I plan to let my little genius show me how to use it properly. That is the benefit of having technical geniuses in the home.
Your poem is precious. It reminds me of a time in the past when as a child I had these kind of fantasies, inspired by Disney movies and favorite story telling books.
I hope you do well in the contest and this picture is precious too.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
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Hello Trish:
I am laughing at your Author notes. I know I have yet to use the advanced editor. I plan to let my little genius show me how to use it properly. That is the benefit of having technical geniuses in the home.
Your poem is precious. It reminds me of a time in the past when as a child I had these kind of fantasies, inspired by Disney movies and favorite story telling books.
I hope you do well in the contest and this picture is precious too.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
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Hi Tier. What a heartfelt review. I'm glad it evoked good memories for you.
Yes, I'm glad you have someone on your side, because every time I try and use the advanced editor, it is so frustrating. If I try switching to it (after writing) to change something, then it messes up my poem.
Many thanks again, friend, for reviewing and good wishes
Happy Monday
Hugs Trisha
