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haiku-songbird sings

peaceful paridise

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Comment from zanya
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This Haiku, oozing lovely 's' sounds captures a beautiful end- of- day moment, as night is about to fall - a sense of sheer tranquillity and a stunning visual

 Comment Written 27-May-2017


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2017
    Zanya; thanks for taking your time to stop by and read and review this writing which I truly appreciate.
    Alex
Comment from Ashlie Daza
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The breathtaking view of the darkening sky with the bird's silh
Nouette is the perfect accompaniment for your beautiful poem. They both compliment each other. Great job, It's a beautiful Haiku. Good
luck.

 Comment Written 27-May-2017


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2017
    Ashlie; thank you very much for stopping by and taking your time to read and review this writing which I truly appreciate.
    Alex
reply by Ashlie Daza on 11-Jun-2017
    You are very welcome.
Comment from tfawcus
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Insistent use of assonance and alliteration give this Haiku a smooth flow and a calm feel, in consonance with the topic of birdsong singing the sun to sleep. There is a typo in your title: "Peaceful paridise" (Paradise), but that is a minor point, easily fixed! I wish you well in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-May-2017


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2017
    Tony; thank you very much my friend wishing me well in the contest and for reading and reviewing this haiku which I truly appreciate wholeheartedly and take care and have a good one my friend.
    Alex
Comment from Dan-C
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I really enjoyed your poem. Wild song birds are a great way to end or begin the day.
Good luck with the contest, this is truly a wonderful poem.
Thanks for sharing,
Dan

 Comment Written 26-May-2017


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2017
    Dan; thank you very much for reading and reviewing this writing which I truly appreciate your time in doing a great job of reviewing the poem.
    Alex
Comment from JW
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Thanks for sharing this poem and good luck in the contest.

Song birds do so much to cheer people during the day. Each time I take my dogs walking I can hear them singing high up in the trees. JW

 Comment Written 26-May-2017


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2017
    JW thanks for stopping by my friend and take care and have a good one and thank you for wishing me good luck in the contest and God bless.
    Alex
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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haiku- songbird sings, is an extremely well written piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll keep reading.

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 Comment Written 26-May-2017


reply by the author on 01-Jun-2017
    Duchess; thank you for taking your time to review and rating this item a four-star rating which I truly appreciate. Have
    Alex
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 01-Jun-2017

    Alex, you're very welcome. Take care.

    Best wishes, the Duchess
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello my friend

Lovely haiku about a little bird singing It's adorable. Good form and syllable count. The presentation is beautiful.Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-May-2017


reply by the author on 26-May-2017
    Dear Gypsy; thank you very much for reading and reviewing this work which I truly appreciate.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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This is a very good example of Haiku. This one actually, follows the rules. I have seen many so called Haikus the seem to make up their own rules as they go.

 Comment Written 26-May-2017


reply by the author on 26-May-2017
    Thomas; it is so true that semicolons do not follow the actual requirements for said format. Thank you for reading and reviewing this work which I truly appreciate.
Comment from Bucketlist
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I either commented on this Haiku or voted for it - I don't remember which!!! Forgive me. Either way I think it's beautiful, from presentation to word choices. I wish we could get more 6 stars, but I've asked to no avail.

 Comment Written 26-May-2017


reply by the author on 26-May-2017
    Bucketlist; thank you very much for taking your time to read and review this work which I truly appreciate.
reply by Bucketlist on 26-May-2017
    Anytime
Comment from Elizabeth Daniels
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Very nice. Sets a peaceful mood. I especially like the alliteration . Not sure that I understand all the rules to the contest, but good luck in it anyway. lol

 Comment Written 26-May-2017


reply by the author on 26-May-2017
    Elizabeth; thank you for taking your time and effort into reading and reviewing this work.