Substandard Service
The chosen restaurant of the asses--er--masses!7 total reviews
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Mike,
I think this is thinly veiled attack on the media and the beloved 45th. I don't know how you can be so hurtful and full of Bile when the majority of the country loves the fine cuisine being presented to it...
Another fine splurge of venom
G
reply by the author on 20-May-2017
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Hi Mike,
I think this is thinly veiled attack on the media and the beloved 45th. I don't know how you can be so hurtful and full of Bile when the majority of the country loves the fine cuisine being presented to it...
Another fine splurge of venom
G
Comment Written 20-May-2017
reply by the author on 20-May-2017
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Thanks, G-Mang--I'd like to apologize to everyone who supports him--that guy who is totally in a Kool-Aid trance and wearing those snazzy rose-colored glasses--sharp, by the way--I know, and realize I'm in the minority--oh, wait, that's right, I'm not--never mind!
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Fun interraction and please remind me not to take you out to eat.lol
DEmand more nutrition? There is nothing left to demand...most of it has been forfeited anyway.lol
reply by the author on 20-May-2017
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Fun interraction and please remind me not to take you out to eat.lol
DEmand more nutrition? There is nothing left to demand...most of it has been forfeited anyway.lol
Comment Written 19-May-2017
reply by the author on 20-May-2017
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Thanks, Barb, and true, Barb, very true!
Comment from Poetic Friend
The complete dialogue works extremely well to describe the characters, the scenery, the story direction, and the story itself.
I did not notice any SPAG's. Maybe because I was so engaged in the story that I did not notice any.
Remind me not to eat at this restaurant.
Great story!
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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The complete dialogue works extremely well to describe the characters, the scenery, the story direction, and the story itself.
I did not notice any SPAG's. Maybe because I was so engaged in the story that I did not notice any.
Remind me not to eat at this restaurant.
Great story!
Comment Written 19-May-2017
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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Thanks, PF--and I will!
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
let us enjoy [out] shit-steak <-- I think you meant to write OUR here.
So... are they really serving shit? What is DUMP? I'm not sure I understand the philosophical point. ?
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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let us enjoy [out] shit-steak <-- I think you meant to write OUR here.
So... are they really serving shit? What is DUMP? I'm not sure I understand the philosophical point. ?
Comment Written 19-May-2017
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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I'm sorry, that's my endearing nickname for Trump--and my point is we're getting so ripped of by our media.
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Ohhh... okay, got it now. :)
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Good, I've added 'President" before the first 'Dump', you were correct, I could have been clearer!
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Good, I've added 'President" before the first 'Dump', you were correct, I could have been clearer!
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. Well, this is certainly something different to read. I like the idea you are portraying here as in regards to our president. It's going to be interesting to see where our country winds up in this mess.
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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Excellent. Well, this is certainly something different to read. I like the idea you are portraying here as in regards to our president. It's going to be interesting to see where our country winds up in this mess.
Comment Written 19-May-2017
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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Thanks, PBB--yes, it certainly will, I can't see it ending well, no matter what happens.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is a live, hot and nutritious commentary and of course philosophic fiction bones by bones, I liked and enjoyed the dialogues, plot, setting and characterization, diction or language, so a 6-STAR.
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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This is a live, hot and nutritious commentary and of course philosophic fiction bones by bones, I liked and enjoyed the dialogues, plot, setting and characterization, diction or language, so a 6-STAR.
Comment Written 19-May-2017
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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Wow, thanks, ALD!
Comment from Dean Kuch
The angry patron was absolutely justified in being angry!
When are people gonna wise up?
But, just like with the Presidency, most food at fine dining establishments, and some people's poetry and stories here on good old FanStory, it all boils down to this:
Presentation, presentation, presentation...
It's all in how it's served up, you see?
But, you really wouldn't know anything about that where my own writing is concerned now, would you, Mike?
You stop reading and reviewing my work a long time ago, for whatever reasons.
Que sera, sera...
~Dean
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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The angry patron was absolutely justified in being angry!
When are people gonna wise up?
But, just like with the Presidency, most food at fine dining establishments, and some people's poetry and stories here on good old FanStory, it all boils down to this:
Presentation, presentation, presentation...
It's all in how it's served up, you see?
But, you really wouldn't know anything about that where my own writing is concerned now, would you, Mike?
You stop reading and reviewing my work a long time ago, for whatever reasons.
Que sera, sera...
~Dean
Comment Written 19-May-2017
reply by the author on 19-May-2017
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I'm not singling your work out for avoidance, Dean, I don't read a lot anyway, because my eyes don't play well together, thanks to a car accident/coma suffered years ago, so it's not anything you've said.
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Okay, I was just wondering.
Thanks for letting me know.
I have had a negative...effect on more than a few here.
Just my nature I suppose.
Have a great weekend.
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No, not at all, same with my stuff!
