Lace
The beauty of nature20 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi (*>*)
= What a beautiful picture!
= Super depiction of it as well.
= Nicely penned and presented.
= Nice to be back, but will be here and there in limited time-frames.
= I'm still editing to publish.
= I will happily review those who follow me, but because of limited time-frame, will not be able to review ALL of each person posts.
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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
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Hi (*>*)
= What a beautiful picture!
= Super depiction of it as well.
= Nicely penned and presented.
= Nice to be back, but will be here and there in limited time-frames.
= I'm still editing to publish.
= I will happily review those who follow me, but because of limited time-frame, will not be able to review ALL of each person posts.
= => LATEST PUBLISHING <= =
= 1 = Heartfelt II - Heart and Soul (Poetry)
= 2 = Dare To Dream (Book 1 of 'The Allister Saga)
= 3 = Lethal Deception (Contemporary Novel)
= => TO BE RELEASED in a few days <= =
= 4 = Maybe Someday (Book II of Allister Saga)
Cheers ... Jax (*>*)
Comment Written 08-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2017
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Wow thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. Welcome back!
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Thanks so much. (*<*)
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a very nicely constructed short poem. I apologize for not reading it sooner. As you probably know my dog was very sick and passed this week. I've not been on FanStory too much lately. Your poem describes a beautiful scene with good word choices. I agree, winter storms do look like lace. Marilyn
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
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This is a very nicely constructed short poem. I apologize for not reading it sooner. As you probably know my dog was very sick and passed this week. I've not been on FanStory too much lately. Your poem describes a beautiful scene with good word choices. I agree, winter storms do look like lace. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-May-2017
reply by the author on 16-May-2017
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That was extremely nice of you to take the time to review. It is difficult when we loose a loved on whether they have 2 legs or 4. Sometimes I think the loss of a pet who is really a good friend/ buddy, to be a lot harder to deal with than other deaths. Take time to heal and always remember the bond, the love. Blessed Be Marilyn
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Thank you, again, aryr.
Comment from Joseph W. Sestrich
Aw yes, Nature the great teacher; the master of art, creation and transitional process. And, as you so accurately pen, "Beautiful Grace"
Nicely done.
reply by the author on 04-May-2017
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Aw yes, Nature the great teacher; the master of art, creation and transitional process. And, as you so accurately pen, "Beautiful Grace"
Nicely done.
Comment Written 04-May-2017
reply by the author on 04-May-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind comments.
Comment from estory
You managed to pack this tight space with images, and create a nice musical effect with all the rhymes. Its a nice exercise in poetry, and can be useful in honing skills that highlight intense spaces within longer poems. But these tight little structures are a little too small for me. I think poetry is better opened up and given the freedom to take flight, fill the space it grows to fill. estory
reply by the author on 04-May-2017
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You managed to pack this tight space with images, and create a nice musical effect with all the rhymes. Its a nice exercise in poetry, and can be useful in honing skills that highlight intense spaces within longer poems. But these tight little structures are a little too small for me. I think poetry is better opened up and given the freedom to take flight, fill the space it grows to fill. estory
Comment Written 04-May-2017
reply by the author on 04-May-2017
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Thank you for reviewing, I wish you well with your longer writings.
Comment from bertranclan
I especially liked this poem because I live in a part of Texas that rarely sees snow. You have managed to create a lovely image in a compact form. That's hard to do, but you did it. Bravo!
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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I especially liked this poem because I live in a part of Texas that rarely sees snow. You have managed to create a lovely image in a compact form. That's hard to do, but you did it. Bravo!
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing and for your kind comments.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your write has great imagery as snow and ice reminds me of lace and it is gentle. I wish you luck with the contest, ten words and you painted a picture for me, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Your write has great imagery as snow and ice reminds me of lace and it is gentle. I wish you luck with the contest, ten words and you painted a picture for me, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Thanks you so much for your kind comments and for your good luck wishes.
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing this beautiful poem depicting a peaceful scene. Your entry in the Under Ten competition should do well. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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thank you for sharing this beautiful poem depicting a peaceful scene. Your entry in the Under Ten competition should do well. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Thank you for your kind comments and the good luck wishes.
Comment from XGoneX
Hello,
I've read many excellent entries for this contest. This one is also great.
Snow and Ice
Creates winter lace
Beautiful grace. -- great flow, rhyming and exceptional imagery. You follow the contest rules.
I wish you the best x
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Hello,
I've read many excellent entries for this contest. This one is also great.
Snow and Ice
Creates winter lace
Beautiful grace. -- great flow, rhyming and exceptional imagery. You follow the contest rules.
I wish you the best x
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Thank you for reviewing and your kind comments and good luck wishes.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A very good entry.
Hemingway was challenged to write a story using less than ten words. He wrote:
For sale
Baby shoes
Never worn
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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A very good entry.
Hemingway was challenged to write a story using less than ten words. He wrote:
For sale
Baby shoes
Never worn
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Thank you and just for the moment I feel as good as Hemingway.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery poet,
This is a lovely scene you're painting here. *smile* The photo is gorgeous - makes me wish I could see all that for myself! (Though not now, so close to Spring's warmth!) haha! Good luck!
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Dear Mystery poet,
This is a lovely scene you're painting here. *smile* The photo is gorgeous - makes me wish I could see all that for myself! (Though not now, so close to Spring's warmth!) haha! Good luck!
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Thank you for your kind words and good luck wishes.
