Animal Magnetism
funny animal 5-7-517 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 about animals, Animal Magnetism, has the required syllables in the right place and let's us know that you are a cross-species kind of guy. Watch out for those banana rams.
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This 5-7-5 about animals, Animal Magnetism, has the required syllables in the right place and let's us know that you are a cross-species kind of guy. Watch out for those banana rams.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2017
Comment from MLEaton
I think you meant 'foul' rather than 'fowl' but, apart from that, this is a great 5-7-5 poem. Very well presented and funny ... of course, I loved the last line! Well done and thank you for the giggle.
Marion:)
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I think you meant 'foul' rather than 'fowl' but, apart from that, this is a great 5-7-5 poem. Very well presented and funny ... of course, I loved the last line! Well done and thank you for the giggle.
Marion:)
Comment Written 25-Apr-2017
Comment from TPAC
Cleverly done with a punching wit to enhance a smile. Pleasing to the read and captivating to readers interests. No suggestion of improvements: well structured conveyance.
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Cleverly done with a punching wit to enhance a smile. Pleasing to the read and captivating to readers interests. No suggestion of improvements: well structured conveyance.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2017
Comment from Mustang Patty
Wow - what a thing to realize. Thank goodness we all don't have to sleep with furry, fowl smelling things. It would make for frightful nights! Your poem fits all the requirements for a contest entry. Good luck!
~patty~
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Wow - what a thing to realize. Thank goodness we all don't have to sleep with furry, fowl smelling things. It would make for frightful nights! Your poem fits all the requirements for a contest entry. Good luck!
~patty~
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
Comment from LaRosa
oh, my gosh, awesome!
I love your sense of humor.
Were you listening in-at our door?
The picture is as creepy as the idea expressed in the poem; but then, kinda cute too. A good choice.
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oh, my gosh, awesome!
I love your sense of humor.
Were you listening in-at our door?
The picture is as creepy as the idea expressed in the poem; but then, kinda cute too. A good choice.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Oh yes, this is something we've all thought at some time. You stuck to form with this one mikey, witty - yes and a great ending line. Great photo too,
cheers,
valda
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Oh yes, this is something we've all thought at some time. You stuck to form with this one mikey, witty - yes and a great ending line. Great photo too,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
Comment from kathleenspalding
Haha! A pun (foul/fowl) and a fur-real chuckle. Cute five - seven - five is perfect for the prompt. Excellent choice of artwork. Good luck in the contest.
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Haha! A pun (foul/fowl) and a fur-real chuckle. Cute five - seven - five is perfect for the prompt. Excellent choice of artwork. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
OMG Hahaha... poor wife... this is so mean. LoL
Good job with the presentation and the syllable count. The lines connect well grammatically and the meaning is appropriate for the contest rules. Well done. Yours is the best one so far.
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Hello, my friend,
OMG Hahaha... poor wife... this is so mean. LoL
Good job with the presentation and the syllable count. The lines connect well grammatically and the meaning is appropriate for the contest rules. Well done. Yours is the best one so far.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
Comment from Dean Kuch
If a woman said something like that to me, Mikey, I would respond by saying, "Yeah, I know. Wanna monkey around? I'm really ape over you..." bwa-ha-ha-ha-aaaaa...
Cute poem.
Best wishes in the contest.
~Dean
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If a woman said something like that to me, Mikey, I would respond by saying, "Yeah, I know. Wanna monkey around? I'm really ape over you..." bwa-ha-ha-ha-aaaaa...
Cute poem.
Best wishes in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
Comment from nordicgirl
The damn thing is, I know they slept with you anyway. Well, you just cannot resist getting a picture of yourself posted. Nice pose though, I know it works, I just have no idea WHY! This is too funny. Some gals like hairy ya know. NG
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The damn thing is, I know they slept with you anyway. Well, you just cannot resist getting a picture of yourself posted. Nice pose though, I know it works, I just have no idea WHY! This is too funny. Some gals like hairy ya know. NG
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
