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Cupcakes for Howie

and the making thereof

6 total reviews 
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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Very funny, but a lot of cleaning up to do. I wish you good luck in the contest.Contests are fun. I seldom win but when I do I celebrate and do a lot of bragging.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
    good for you. that's a perk of winning.
    At first I thought you meant cleaning up of my post, then I realized you meant the kitchen.
Comment from Mustang Patty
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thank you for sharing your entry in the enjoyment of eating contest. I could picture the chocolate icing going everywhere and I hated the thought of someone having to clean it up. Glad you didn't leave it for Andi's mother. Well done and I wish you luck in the contest,
~patty~

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
    thanks, Patty
Comment from Marykelly
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This is a story about something that was never meant to be funny that turned into a hilarious scene that continued to keep the participants laughing long after the incident was over. The tone is tongue-in-cheek that adds to the overall humor.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
    thank you
Comment from kahpot
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Excellent read and you covered all points in the competition in which I wish you good luck can only imagine the fun you had during and after this adventure****kahpot

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
    thank you. It was fiction, but fun to write.
Comment from Cmelton
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Humor can be a subjective thing but to me the only funny part was when the icing got all over the place. To me it was not that funny. Also, the grammar in some places seemed off and abrupt.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
    thanks a lot
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
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'Cupcakes for Howie' is a great read.
Well-written.
I enjoyed reading it. It made me laugh.
Love the dialogue. It's so dramatic.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
    thank you!