Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Love your lighthearted poem of one of everyone's favorites--the Eiffel Tower written in rhyming couplets. The poem form is perfect for the playfulness of topic and the landmark. Marilyn

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2017

---

reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017

Great review -thanks for reading zanya

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Amazing the description you gave this icon, a woman dressed in splendor an actress with whom you want a picture with, sometimes the picture explains the words, not this time your words explain and enhance this beautiful picture****kahpot

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2017

---

reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017

Delighted with this review zanya

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

That is a landmark well-known all around the world. I like the use of French like "chic, gauloise, finesse." The tower is "la tour" so the noun is feminine so the use of of "gauloise" is right but then Parisien should also be feminine - Parisienne. Also, there is an extra space in "wrought- iron."

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2017

---

reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017

Thanks for reading & comments much appreciated zanya

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

And no one can comprehend why the tower was so bitterly opposed when it was first being built!

The little touches of French add some flair to your simple rhyming couplets as you paint this lovely tribute of an outstanding landmark.

Good luck.

Steve

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2017

---

reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017

Thanks for reading zanya