April's moon
Poem 5/7/53 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
the glow of April's5<>pinkish moon illuminates7==
Spring's awakening5
your phrases one and two connect well, you paint a lovely picture with your words. The syllabic count is correct. Excellent job, you get my vote.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
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the glow of April's5<>pinkish moon illuminates7==
Spring's awakening5
your phrases one and two connect well, you paint a lovely picture with your words. The syllabic count is correct. Excellent job, you get my vote.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
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Thanks for this accolade zanya
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
Great title.-
Excellent choice of artwork.- It fits both the title and poem.
The photo of the moon peaking out from behind the trees fit perfectly with this piece.
I see no need for improvement.
Nice background color.
Thank you for sharing this piece with us.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
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Great title.-
Excellent choice of artwork.- It fits both the title and poem.
The photo of the moon peaking out from behind the trees fit perfectly with this piece.
I see no need for improvement.
Nice background color.
Thank you for sharing this piece with us.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 01-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
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Great review zanya
Comment from bmethner
The artwork was a perfect choice. The sentiment and word choice of the poem are beautiful, but the second line only has 6 syllables instead of the required 7. Perhaps you have time to correct that before the contest. Good luck
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
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The artwork was a perfect choice. The sentiment and word choice of the poem are beautiful, but the second line only has 6 syllables instead of the required 7. Perhaps you have time to correct that before the contest. Good luck
Comment Written 01-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
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Much appreciated - thanks for engaging zanya
