I Guess I'll Be Gettin' More Mutin'
Potlatch Challenge--Triolet27 total reviews
Comment from Sefiros
Interesting take on the situation between Donald Trump and Putin. Trump doesn't seem to realize the consequences of what he's doing and you compressed that into poetry form. Nice work.
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Interesting take on the situation between Donald Trump and Putin. Trump doesn't seem to realize the consequences of what he's doing and you compressed that into poetry form. Nice work.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2017
Comment from webfoot
the whole world is talking "trump" these days, it's almost become a new language and you do it very well here, Michael. You've used words I've never seen before but they work and might find their way in to the new "trumpisums"
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the whole world is talking "trump" these days, it's almost become a new language and you do it very well here, Michael. You've used words I've never seen before but they work and might find their way in to the new "trumpisums"
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
I have no idea about format, here, Mikey, but it looks okay to me! LOL You have written a fabulous poem anyway with lots of humour and the lines are clever. Well done, get better soon, hugs, Giddy
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I have no idea about format, here, Mikey, but it looks okay to me! LOL You have written a fabulous poem anyway with lots of humour and the lines are clever. Well done, get better soon, hugs, Giddy
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
Comment from fionageorge
Here I am in Australia, thoroughly enjoying your take, and agreeing! Great that we can actually still laugh about all the shinanigans going on around the world. Thanks for sharing this and putting a smile on my face. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
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Here I am in Australia, thoroughly enjoying your take, and agreeing! Great that we can actually still laugh about all the shinanigans going on around the world. Thanks for sharing this and putting a smile on my face. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment Written 20-Mar-2017
Comment from dragonpoet
I like this mono-rhyme triolet. In its witty way it does seem to describe what is happening with our new president and Putin.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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I like this mono-rhyme triolet. In its witty way it does seem to describe what is happening with our new president and Putin.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
Comment from Dawn Munro
LOL - your Triolet is a delight, and whether or not it 'fits' within the specified parameters of the potlatch challenge, I enjoyed it tremendously. I have a big grin on my face that I can well imagine will be there all day. :))
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LOL - your Triolet is a delight, and whether or not it 'fits' within the specified parameters of the potlatch challenge, I enjoyed it tremendously. I have a big grin on my face that I can well imagine will be there all day. :))
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
Comment from country ranch writer
Didn't know you were sick pal I hope you are feeling better soon. Nice presentation though for this scared poem.our world is falling apart as we speak.
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Didn't know you were sick pal I hope you are feeling better soon. Nice presentation though for this scared poem.our world is falling apart as we speak.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
Comment from crzypnter
Hi mikey,
It feels like ages since I have read one of your poem's. I have been off and on so it's possibly just me. Once again you show us your unfathomable ability to write. Nice humor here. Hope you feel better soon. God bless
August
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Hi mikey,
It feels like ages since I have read one of your poem's. I have been off and on so it's possibly just me. Once again you show us your unfathomable ability to write. Nice humor here. Hope you feel better soon. God bless
August
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
LOL hilarious, I love it! Stupid child/man trump and his band of white undies are an accident waiting to happen. I hate them. I don't hate too many people in the world but I hate them.
Do you watch SNL? They do a Putin and Trump schetch that is funny. I read the NY Times briefly but everyday I watch Trever Noah from the Comedy Central show, Closer Look with Seth Meyers? The news are too freaking depressing to watch straight up.
Good job honey,
Gypsy hugs
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LOL hilarious, I love it! Stupid child/man trump and his band of white undies are an accident waiting to happen. I hate them. I don't hate too many people in the world but I hate them.
Do you watch SNL? They do a Putin and Trump schetch that is funny. I read the NY Times briefly but everyday I watch Trever Noah from the Comedy Central show, Closer Look with Seth Meyers? The news are too freaking depressing to watch straight up.
Good job honey,
Gypsy hugs
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
LOL oh my goodness you are at least still here in spirit and spice.
This is cute and yes even with the liberties, it works for me
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LOL oh my goodness you are at least still here in spirit and spice.
This is cute and yes even with the liberties, it works for me
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
