Perennials of War
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Chapter Sechs part zwei"Is Anderson a gallant knight? Can he recover Shan
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Comment from Thesis
An interesting chapter. I like how you cast doubt and then prolonged the decision to act on involving the cousin. It set the mood and tone for waiting and to not act hastily. The pool game was a good diversion from having to decide right away. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2017
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An interesting chapter. I like how you cast doubt and then prolonged the decision to act on involving the cousin. It set the mood and tone for waiting and to not act hastily. The pool game was a good diversion from having to decide right away. Nicely done.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from Lu Saluna
Ah, looks like Phillip did hit a nerve. Nicely done. I like how you have let this sneak into the storyline. I have been wondering if Anderson is trustworthy or working both sides of the fence. A well-written chapter and you left a nice hook at the end.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2017
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Ah, looks like Phillip did hit a nerve. Nicely done. I like how you have let this sneak into the storyline. I have been wondering if Anderson is trustworthy or working both sides of the fence. A well-written chapter and you left a nice hook at the end.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
This is so cool, a really amazing write, well you never fail, always fascinating and captivating your audience and I am a proud member of that audience, A great fan and really enjoy each chapter or segment of your work very well done kindest regards Meia x
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2017
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This is so cool, a really amazing write, well you never fail, always fascinating and captivating your audience and I am a proud member of that audience, A great fan and really enjoy each chapter or segment of your work very well done kindest regards Meia x
Comment Written 07-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Excellent and suspenseful chapter as always. Your writing is always so clear and easy to relate too. Good work as always, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2017
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Excellent and suspenseful chapter as always. Your writing is always so clear and easy to relate too. Good work as always, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 07-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from Astrid Usher
I enjoyed the snippet of information presented and how the characters chatted at an easy pace. The chapter had me wanting to follow on with what happens next.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2017
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I enjoyed the snippet of information presented and how the characters chatted at an easy pace. The chapter had me wanting to follow on with what happens next.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sis Cat
Well, well, well, Shana did not go to bed. I can tell by Anderson's reaction that Philip hit a nerve when he mused aloud, "I'm wondering if Shana isn't getting to you more than her problem." Anderson wants to pretend to himself that he is helping Shana only for altruistic reasons: "Don't be silly. I'm always willing to help people." Anderson is unable to admit to himself or another person that he is in love with Shana. He is almost like Star trek's Spoke because he tries to base his decisions on reason and logic. To give himself over to the wildness of love is foreign with him. I also feel he suffers from the once-bitten-twice-shy nature of his tumultuous divorce. He is not eager to go back into a relation. Right on cue . . . ball . . .Shana walks in to test his set-jaw resolve.
We'll see what happens next. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2017
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Well, well, well, Shana did not go to bed. I can tell by Anderson's reaction that Philip hit a nerve when he mused aloud, "I'm wondering if Shana isn't getting to you more than her problem." Anderson wants to pretend to himself that he is helping Shana only for altruistic reasons: "Don't be silly. I'm always willing to help people." Anderson is unable to admit to himself or another person that he is in love with Shana. He is almost like Star trek's Spoke because he tries to base his decisions on reason and logic. To give himself over to the wildness of love is foreign with him. I also feel he suffers from the once-bitten-twice-shy nature of his tumultuous divorce. He is not eager to go back into a relation. Right on cue . . . ball . . .Shana walks in to test his set-jaw resolve.
We'll see what happens next. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from light
I like that your last post introduced the idea that there could be more to the interest in the art than meets the eye. Now Anderson must find someone in the Russian mafia. You always leave me wanting more
Elaine
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2017
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I like that your last post introduced the idea that there could be more to the interest in the art than meets the eye. Now Anderson must find someone in the Russian mafia. You always leave me wanting more
Elaine
Comment Written 06-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Anderson definitely has the hots for Shana. The story continues to fold and I love your use of dialogue to move the story along. Using the setting of the pool table and game was inspired. You did a great job of showing us the men as they took their turns.
Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2017
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Anderson definitely has the hots for Shana. The story continues to fold and I love your use of dialogue to move the story along. Using the setting of the pool table and game was inspired. You did a great job of showing us the men as they took their turns.
Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
Comment Written 06-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Oh let the romance begin I think again this is well written and I love the way you are building the story just the right length to enjoy well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2017
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Oh let the romance begin I think again this is well written and I love the way you are building the story just the right length to enjoy well done regards Jill
Comment Written 06-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Interesting chapter with a bit of a cliffhanger. I an see the suspense building as the story progresses. Good follow through.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2017
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Interesting chapter with a bit of a cliffhanger. I an see the suspense building as the story progresses. Good follow through.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
