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Get it off your chest flatly

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Comment from Rlegel99
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A view on fake news is under the twenty syllables contest rules. Poem flows well, has good rhythm. A good entry for the contest. Good luck.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 09-Mar-2017
    Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from BeasPeas
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Great job with this. It's impossible to keep secrets or perpetuate falsities nowadays with direct communication from elected officials to the citizenry. Sooner or later the truth always comes out. The media for all intents and purposes has become completely irrelevant. Marilyn

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 09-Mar-2017
    Where is it all going to end ? Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Cindy Warren
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Yeah, you have to watch where you get your news these days. Of course there has always been tabloid trash, but now with the internet there's a lot more of it and it's harder to tell it from real news. You'd have to be pretty gullible to believe everything you read. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 09-Mar-2017
    Yes we're snowed under ! Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written piece for the prompt. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery from your words. Best wishes in the contest! Teri

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 09-Mar-2017
    Thanks for the accolade zanya
Comment from marinadawn
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The image is very puzzling but conveys a sense of brokenness and disjoint.
I like the poem and agree fake news can fan dangerous flames and the web is making information true or false so accessible .I think the poem met the goal of a political view best of luck in the contest

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 09-Mar-2017
    Thanks for the critique zanya