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Fairies Winter

Ode to Winter 5-7-5 contest

17 total reviews 
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
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Hi Kerry,

I can see why this Ode to Winter won the contest. Congrats! I like the comparison of snow to glittered fairy dust ... lovely! Great choice of artwork too to accompany and complement your 5-7-5. Well done!

Connie

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
    That is very sweet. I appreciate you taking time to read it.
Comment from mermaids
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This is an excellent fantasy poem that captures the feel of winter. I like the image of snow as fairydust, it adds magic to winter. Excellent haiku form that creates a scene and feel for winter.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017
    Thank you for kind review, I appreciate it greatly.
Comment from Danny Jock
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Hi friend, this is a great imagery write. The dust ..the snow flakes coming down and ushering in winter.
The beauty is exquisite.

Danny Jock

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017
    Thank you so much for your wonderful review.
Comment from Aussie
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My best wishes for your writing prompt. Ode to winter, we are in a muddle in Oz, waiting for autumn! Your three little lines said it all, adding the fairy dust was a nice touch. XXK

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017
    Thank you Kay, I believe I sent my response on your PM last night. Thanks again, still hoping you get the rain.
    ~Kerry~
Comment from lyenochka
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I like the description of "glittered fairydust" for snow. It is March and I'm looking forward for snow to go away although it is pretty. It's lovely on the tree branches but on the roads, it's been a hazard.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
    The roads are bad here too, I can't wait for spring, even though I love winter. I live by lake Ontario and the snow is so different then were I grew up on L.I., It's something in the air it, really does sparkle like glittered fairy dust. Thank you for your review!
Comment from Craigitar
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Very nicely done! So much imagery in so few words. I could almost feel the chill and see the sparkle. Good job and luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
    Thank you so much for your wonderful review, i appreciate you taking time to read it.
Comment from Hitcher
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A romantic, magical ode to winter, the visuals were cool and your choice of artwork was a great companion for your creative little 5/7/5. Good Luck!

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
    Thank so much for the lovely review, I do appreciate you taking time to read it.
Comment from YNWA
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This is a lovely ode to winter, you have painted a wonderful picture of snowfall and the artwork accompanies your words beautifully.
Have a lovely evening

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
    That was sweet, I appreciate you reading this and giving me such a wonderful review.
Comment from flylikeaneagle
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Beautiful photo of the lady with snow. We still have snow
on the ground. The dogs love eating the snow. The blankets
are snowy white and beautiful. So glad spring is on the way.

My daughters love seeing the blankets of snow on the Rocky
Mountains. They got to take photos on the Boulder mts. with
65 degrees and sun. So nice to share the snow times.

flylikeaneagle

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
    I'm so happy you liked it. I don't have my dogs anymore but they loved to eat snow too. The snow must look beautiful on the Rocky Mountains, Hope I get to see them one day.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Beautiful twinkling dust of snow like fairy dust falling like magic, such a perfect image of winter, serene and peacefully and your poem is filled with tranquility, a joy to read, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
    Thank you Dolly that is so kind of you, I appreciate your wonder review and compliment.