Freedom
Free verse42 total reviews
Comment from Jackarrie
HI
I would like to congratulate on your win with this exceptional write, I enjoyed reading it. I feel for the suffering of the poor people that in dyer circumstances. Empathy along with sympathy is felt in the words of your free verse. Well done Mary
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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HI
I would like to congratulate on your win with this exceptional write, I enjoyed reading it. I feel for the suffering of the poor people that in dyer circumstances. Empathy along with sympathy is felt in the words of your free verse. Well done Mary
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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Thanks very much for your review of "Freedom", Mary - a poem close to my heart.
Comment from dragonpoet
This exudes emotions about the effects of abuse and letting others know they aren't alone. These are scars that are hard to heal but with help maybe they will
Congrats on placing in the contest.
Keep writing
dp
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2017
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This exudes emotions about the effects of abuse and letting others know they aren't alone. These are scars that are hard to heal but with help maybe they will
Congrats on placing in the contest.
Keep writing
dp
Comment Written 13-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2017
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Thanks, Joan. I was delighted that this gained a placing in the contest.
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You're welcome.
Joan
Comment from IndianaIrish
Your free verse poem is awesome, Tony! The alliteration, bit of rhyme, enjambment, and emotion are all wonderful. I can't believe the beauty in the photo you chose. Those barbs from a barbed-wire fence that turn into birds flying to freedom is perfect for your words. Best wishes to you in the contest.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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Your free verse poem is awesome, Tony! The alliteration, bit of rhyme, enjambment, and emotion are all wonderful. I can't believe the beauty in the photo you chose. Those barbs from a barbed-wire fence that turn into birds flying to freedom is perfect for your words. Best wishes to you in the contest.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment Written 05-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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Many thanks, Karyn, for dropping by to review "Freedom" and for your kind words about it. Much appreciated! Tony
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Plenty of feeling in your free verse on freedom Tony. Are we ever really free or does the abuse, the oppression flee with them? An emotional read, and well said. Dramatic and powerful and I wish you luck in the contest.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017
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Plenty of feeling in your free verse on freedom Tony. Are we ever really free or does the abuse, the oppression flee with them? An emotional read, and well said. Dramatic and powerful and I wish you luck in the contest.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 05-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2017
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Thank you again, Valda. I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. Many thanks, too, for the good luck wishes. Tony
Comment from Pantygynt
Oh yes indeed. I do hope they let you get away with this piece of metrical, rhyming free verse. Personally I am all in favour of this sort of thing as it sings and dances beautifully along the way. In no way could one write a rhyme scheme for it either, even though it contains a plethora of rhyme, but plethorae are allowed as long as they are not regular, and this is about as regular as Brutus was an honourable man.
I love it and I am going to give it six.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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Oh yes indeed. I do hope they let you get away with this piece of metrical, rhyming free verse. Personally I am all in favour of this sort of thing as it sings and dances beautifully along the way. In no way could one write a rhyme scheme for it either, even though it contains a plethora of rhyme, but plethorae are allowed as long as they are not regular, and this is about as regular as Brutus was an honourable man.
I love it and I am going to give it six.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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Many thanks, Jim, for dropping by to review "Freedom" and for the six stars and your kind words about the free verse. Much appreciated! Tony
Comment from Irish Rain
I don't think mankind will ever totally know true freedom. Seems it's always bought at someone else's expense. And, as you said, we continue to take us, with us. A great free verse Mr. Tony, blessings...
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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I don't think mankind will ever totally know true freedom. Seems it's always bought at someone else's expense. And, as you said, we continue to take us, with us. A great free verse Mr. Tony, blessings...
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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Many thanks, Irish Rain, for dropping by to review "Freedom" and for your kind words about it. Much appreciated! Tony
Comment from sunnilicious
This is the first emotionally sad poem I've read from you. The visual imagery is depressing, sad and completely bleak. Communists, dictators, murders and cereal killers... They're just stupid. How to make everybody optimistic..... Good luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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This is the first emotionally sad poem I've read from you. The visual imagery is depressing, sad and completely bleak. Communists, dictators, murders and cereal killers... They're just stupid. How to make everybody optimistic..... Good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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Many thanks, Sunnilicious, for dropping by to review "Freedom" and for your comments. I shall try to choose a more cheerful theme next time! LOL Tony
Comment from catch22
Hi Tony, what a lovely and powerful free verse about the cost of freedom and oppression. I could not agree more with the need for balance between the two. There's an old saying that it takes discipline to be truly free. Excellent rhythm and use of rhyming in the lines of your free verse. Best wishes to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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Hi Tony, what a lovely and powerful free verse about the cost of freedom and oppression. I could not agree more with the need for balance between the two. There's an old saying that it takes discipline to be truly free. Excellent rhythm and use of rhyming in the lines of your free verse. Best wishes to you in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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Many thanks Catch22, for dropping by to review "Freedom" and for your kind words about it. Much appreciated! Tony
Comment from papa55mike
It comes down to what we will really accept in society. How much do we let get by without hurting someone. I love the premise of the well written poem and the picture is amazing! I wish I had a six for you.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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It comes down to what we will really accept in society. How much do we let get by without hurting someone. I love the premise of the well written poem and the picture is amazing! I wish I had a six for you.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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Many thanks, Papa55Mike for dropping by to review "Freedom" and for your suggestion of six-worthiness. Much appreciated! Tony
Comment from krys123
Bravo, Tony;
-a conscientiously Concrete and captivating piece of free verse poetry that I truly enjoyed reading and definitely understood its profound relativity to freedom and how it affects each one of us in different ways.
-The fluidity of this writing was indeed comfortable reading and enticingly made the reading fun and enjoyable. Yet, the words that were offered to this conceptual theme were none other than those atrocities that had taken place in the history of our growth as human beings. Our torturing of others that we call human beings was this atrocity yet have we learned from it all and have we actually set ourselves free from those memories.
-Very well written and good luck in the contest, Tony, and take care and have a good one.
-I truly love the barbed wired picture and with some of the barbs were floating free as birds. Quite and very effective.
-Take care and have a good one.
Alex
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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Bravo, Tony;
-a conscientiously Concrete and captivating piece of free verse poetry that I truly enjoyed reading and definitely understood its profound relativity to freedom and how it affects each one of us in different ways.
-The fluidity of this writing was indeed comfortable reading and enticingly made the reading fun and enjoyable. Yet, the words that were offered to this conceptual theme were none other than those atrocities that had taken place in the history of our growth as human beings. Our torturing of others that we call human beings was this atrocity yet have we learned from it all and have we actually set ourselves free from those memories.
-Very well written and good luck in the contest, Tony, and take care and have a good one.
-I truly love the barbed wired picture and with some of the barbs were floating free as birds. Quite and very effective.
-Take care and have a good one.
Alex
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2017
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Great to hear from you, Alex. Many thanks for dropping by to review "Freedom" and for your kind words about it. Much appreciated! Tony
