Grand Children
Trinet entry9 total reviews
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your lovely, cute poem. It flows and rhymes well and good alliteration of words; lollipops, little, baby binky's, bouncing baby and always adored. Your artwork choice is cute and it goes well with your poem.
angel123
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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I enjoyed reading your lovely, cute poem. It flows and rhymes well and good alliteration of words; lollipops, little, baby binky's, bouncing baby and always adored. Your artwork choice is cute and it goes well with your poem.
angel123
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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Thank you, for your splendid review, I appreciate you taking time to read it.
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. The words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. I think you completed the challenge of the contest well.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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A well-written contest entry. The words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. I think you completed the challenge of the contest well.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this, I much appreciate it.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Grand children bring such joy and it's evident from your wonderful poem that you are having fun being a grand parent, such love bestowed on a child will help him feel secure, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
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Grand children bring such joy and it's evident from your wonderful poem that you are having fun being a grand parent, such love bestowed on a child will help him feel secure, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
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Thank you Dolly :)
Comment from Janet Foor
A fun little Trinet for a sweet little one. I have a Silas "grandson" as well except he is 22 now. But....they never get so old that you stop loving them as your own.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
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A fun little Trinet for a sweet little one. I have a Silas "grandson" as well except he is 22 now. But....they never get so old that you stop loving them as your own.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 02-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
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Awww, that's so sweet. Thank you for your review!!!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Trinet poem. Our grandchildren are adorable and BRI GS the best out of us after they completely stole our hearts.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
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A very well-written Trinet poem. Our grandchildren are adorable and BRI GS the best out of us after they completely stole our hearts.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much, for such a pleasant review.
Comment from writerfan2013
This is very sweet, a nice sentimental poem. I felt a few lines were a little forced in order to meet the requirements of the form /rhyme, (this one : never before I felt grandma's love ) but overall, great job. -Sef
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
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This is very sweet, a nice sentimental poem. I felt a few lines were a little forced in order to meet the requirements of the form /rhyme, (this one : never before I felt grandma's love ) but overall, great job. -Sef
Comment Written 02-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your review. I appreciate you taking time to read it.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I like this piece and the sporadic use of alliteration works very well. great resonance in it.
little baby binky's, little diaper stinky's - neither of these require an apostrophe as they are both plurals only.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
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Hi there,
I like this piece and the sporadic use of alliteration works very well. great resonance in it.
little baby binky's, little diaper stinky's - neither of these require an apostrophe as they are both plurals only.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 02-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. I did not know it didn't require apostrophes. I do say " where are all the baby's binky's. And I tell him he made stinky's. I dont know maybe I' stuck in baby talk mode. :)))
Comment from Cass Carlton
I am not sure who is the luckiest person in this happy merrygoround. but I sure as all get out love the picture of the blue eyed bonny little lad in the Artwork. All I can say is what a lovely folksy picture this piece paints of a doting grandma and a divine little boy to spoil and treasure. The Trinet is new to me although this example seems to follow the requirements of the form. Well done and best wishes to all cheers Cass
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
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I am not sure who is the luckiest person in this happy merrygoround. but I sure as all get out love the picture of the blue eyed bonny little lad in the Artwork. All I can say is what a lovely folksy picture this piece paints of a doting grandma and a divine little boy to spoil and treasure. The Trinet is new to me although this example seems to follow the requirements of the form. Well done and best wishes to all cheers Cass
Comment Written 02-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much for such a sweet review, believe it or not that was my first trinet.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A very good contest entry. I wrote a poem called Grandson. It stated that Grandchildren is God's way of giving us a second chance.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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A very good contest entry. I wrote a poem called Grandson. It stated that Grandchildren is God's way of giving us a second chance.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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It most certainly is, I love him dearly, he's so precious to me.
Thank you for your review!!!
