Celestial Magic
poem of the recent eclipse23 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Ineffable is a great way to describe the enormous universe! I like the description of eclipsing the "snow moon" which gives us the season the eclipse occurred. I liked that you had all three lines of this brief poem rhyme!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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Ineffable is a great way to describe the enormous universe! I like the description of eclipsing the "snow moon" which gives us the season the eclipse occurred. I liked that you had all three lines of this brief poem rhyme!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your wonderful review. I much appreciate it.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A great contest entry. Hope you do better than I did on my newbie entry six months ago. I still had a lot to learn, like punctuation.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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A great contest entry. Hope you do better than I did on my newbie entry six months ago. I still had a lot to learn, like punctuation.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much Thomas I appreciate your wonderful review.
Comment from JanetRussek
Wonderful Haiku. I'm so glad I didn't miss it. I like it's depth; giving much to ponder. Looking forward to your next piece.
Warm Regards,
Janet
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Wonderful Haiku. I'm so glad I didn't miss it. I like it's depth; giving much to ponder. Looking forward to your next piece.
Warm Regards,
Janet
Comment Written 23-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
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Thank you Janet , I appreciate your wonderful review and six stars,
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You are very welcome. And, the piece certainly deserves a 6.
Comment from Moon baby
Very cool artwork! Your 5-7-5 flows nicely and packs a punch with meaning. Well written and award winning. This is a cool poem.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017
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Very cool artwork! Your 5-7-5 flows nicely and packs a punch with meaning. Well written and award winning. This is a cool poem.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much Moon baby for your wonderful review. Glad you liked it.
Comment from writeapoem
A neat and scientific 5 7 5. Celestial magic coming alive. The image compliments the poem. After reading I can see why it was recognized.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2017
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A neat and scientific 5 7 5. Celestial magic coming alive. The image compliments the poem. After reading I can see why it was recognized.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much for your review. I greatly appreciate it.
Comment from suep
Well written 5-7-5. Good rhyming. The universe is truly amazing. Beautiful artwork selections to complement your words. Nice work ... Best wishes in the contest! :)
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017
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Well written 5-7-5. Good rhyming. The universe is truly amazing. Beautiful artwork selections to complement your words. Nice work ... Best wishes in the contest! :)
Comment Written 28-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017
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Thank you much :)))
Comment from rama devi
The authors notes are not required. The poem portrays this clearly...does not need to be explained. It's an uplifting work. Well done! Love the musicality as well, with all the S and soft C sounds as well as T...wonderful to read aloud. Inspired imagery and tone. Warm welcome to FS!
Smiles, rd
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017
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The authors notes are not required. The poem portrays this clearly...does not need to be explained. It's an uplifting work. Well done! Love the musicality as well, with all the S and soft C sounds as well as T...wonderful to read aloud. Inspired imagery and tone. Warm welcome to FS!
Smiles, rd
Comment Written 28-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review.
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:-))) My pleasure
Comment from jaded831
Your poem was great reading, I like the cross in the picture, because in my mind God is the universe. Your poem pulled it all together. Great poem, great artwork, great everything. The reader could not ask for more.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017
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Your poem was great reading, I like the cross in the picture, because in my mind God is the universe. Your poem pulled it all together. Great poem, great artwork, great everything. The reader could not ask for more.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017
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Thank you so much for your review, that was lovely.
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi friend, this is a clear writing and the words are simple and of every day use. Still they conjure so much beauty and knowledge.
Well done
Danny Jock
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017
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Hi friend, this is a clear writing and the words are simple and of every day use. Still they conjure so much beauty and knowledge.
Well done
Danny Jock
Comment Written 25-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017
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Thank you Danny for such a pleasant review. I appreciate you taking time to read this.
Comment from dragonpoet
Well done description of the picture or good luck in finding the perfect picture for the poem.
The words show how nature and God are intertwined.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017
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Well done description of the picture or good luck in finding the perfect picture for the poem.
The words show how nature and God are intertwined.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 25-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the wonderful review. I much appreciate you take time to read it
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You're welcome.
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