A Moving Masterpiece
Clouds86 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
I'm back for more! It's fascinating to gaze at clouds and see recognizable shapes in them. You captured that sense and much more in this paean to clouds. I thoroughly enjoyed your "masterpiece" metaphor coupled to the "murals" simile and "breaths" image, plus the loving conclusion. Big smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017
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I'm back for more! It's fascinating to gaze at clouds and see recognizable shapes in them. You captured that sense and much more in this paean to clouds. I thoroughly enjoyed your "masterpiece" metaphor coupled to the "murals" simile and "breaths" image, plus the loving conclusion. Big smiles- Joan
Comment Written 21-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017
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Thank you Joan for your thoughtful and encouraging review and for sharing my enjoyment of the fascinating clouds.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from 8Puppies
Your poem is beautiful! I love the word masterpiece in your title. As soon as I saw that word in the title, I was drawn in to read your poem! Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Your poem is beautiful! I love the word masterpiece in your title. As soon as I saw that word in the title, I was drawn in to read your poem! Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from honeytree
The art work is very special
designed in a way that is like
magic to our eyes.
Clouds would love their
journey in their own way
allowing us to see the design
and the rain they can bring.
Honeytree
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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The art work is very special
designed in a way that is like
magic to our eyes.
Clouds would love their
journey in their own way
allowing us to see the design
and the rain they can bring.
Honeytree
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review and those beautiful six stars. I greatly appreciate your kind words.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Clouds are fascinating to watch and dream of what they could represent. I love how you ended this well written poem about the wonder of clouds, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Clouds are fascinating to watch and dream of what they could represent. I love how you ended this well written poem about the wonder of clouds, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thank you Debbie for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Badger_29
A wonderful, whimsical theme,
An opus made for our delight"
A nice focal point. You have masterfully woven together this easy, pleasing read on a subject which has been wondered and written about for ages.
"I've looked at clouds, from both sides now,
From in and out, p and down. It's clouds illusions I recall. I really don't know clouds, at all"
Neil Diamond.
You have lead the reader on a timeless journey, and ended
Beyond the sea
Very well written~
Blessings,
Brother Badger
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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A wonderful, whimsical theme,
An opus made for our delight"
A nice focal point. You have masterfully woven together this easy, pleasing read on a subject which has been wondered and written about for ages.
"I've looked at clouds, from both sides now,
From in and out, p and down. It's clouds illusions I recall. I really don't know clouds, at all"
Neil Diamond.
You have lead the reader on a timeless journey, and ended
Beyond the sea
Very well written~
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thank you Brother Badger for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I love that Neil Diamond song too.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from An Awakened Heart
Wonderful verse and imagery.
I love that I I could sail the skies in my minds eye.
And yes, God does paint beautiful pictures.
Bless you for posting.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Wonderful verse and imagery.
I love that I I could sail the skies in my minds eye.
And yes, God does paint beautiful pictures.
Bless you for posting.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. i love that phrase "In my Minds eye".
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Lulube
regarding your notes, yes the shapes are incredible and some do look like massive cotton balls that could hold your weight, but also have the other side of the coin, black and gray, travelling at fast speeds to dump their water/snow or whip into a funnel and destroy massive sections of land and everything on it.\
great imagery, nice subtle rhyming keeping an even flow in the lines.
lulube
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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regarding your notes, yes the shapes are incredible and some do look like massive cotton balls that could hold your weight, but also have the other side of the coin, black and gray, travelling at fast speeds to dump their water/snow or whip into a funnel and destroy massive sections of land and everything on it.\
great imagery, nice subtle rhyming keeping an even flow in the lines.
lulube
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thank you lulube for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
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Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, A Moving Masterpiece, takes me and, I'm sure, all readers back to the days of lying on our backs and imaging what all the cloud forms meant. Much as ancient man pondered the great movements of gods above the sky, these clouds seemed to take on the images of our greatest joys.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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This poem, A Moving Masterpiece, takes me and, I'm sure, all readers back to the days of lying on our backs and imaging what all the cloud forms meant. Much as ancient man pondered the great movements of gods above the sky, these clouds seemed to take on the images of our greatest joys.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thank you Bill for your thoughtful, encouraging and beautiful review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from RobertaLee
I am not sure who the "you" is that would inhabit with you the cobalt blue but that one would be most content to sail these skies of which you write. Your poem is lovely, perfectly orchestrated rhyme and meter. I particularly love the last stanza and the idea of clouds stretching across infinity...the nth degree of existence and beyond. Thank you for sharing.
Smiles and blessings.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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I am not sure who the "you" is that would inhabit with you the cobalt blue but that one would be most content to sail these skies of which you write. Your poem is lovely, perfectly orchestrated rhyme and meter. I particularly love the last stanza and the idea of clouds stretching across infinity...the nth degree of existence and beyond. Thank you for sharing.
Smiles and blessings.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review and those sparkling six stars. I'm pleased that you shared your favorite stanza. .
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Autumn Splendour
A lovely poem describing the beauty of clouds and alluding it to God's creation. Well done.
As a child, my sister and I used to see objects in clouds and name them to each other.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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A lovely poem describing the beauty of clouds and alluding it to God's creation. Well done.
As a child, my sister and I used to see objects in clouds and name them to each other.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review and for sharing a childhood memory.
Blessings
Janet
