Haiku(cicadas humming)
Haiku -insects20 total reviews
Comment from azwildrosa
Oh how I love these little. My favorite. When I was a child we'd find them all over the place. Today I find them whole and dead. Lol I bring them home to put in my house plants to freak my kids out. This is a great entry for this prompt. Congratulations to your win!
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
Oh how I love these little. My favorite. When I was a child we'd find them all over the place. Today I find them whole and dead. Lol I bring them home to put in my house plants to freak my kids out. This is a great entry for this prompt. Congratulations to your win!
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from mermaids
Excellent haiku about these insects which are quite loud. Your words capture the feel and sound of these insects which come out, I believe at several year intervals.
Excellent haiku form.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
Excellent haiku about these insects which are quite loud. Your words capture the feel and sound of these insects which come out, I believe at several year intervals.
Excellent haiku form.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from robyn corum
'winged music maestros' -- I may have to argue with that a bit...have you HEARD them? hahahaha! They are actually just loud hummers. hahaha! But thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
'winged music maestros' -- I may have to argue with that a bit...have you HEARD them? hahahaha! They are actually just loud hummers. hahaha! But thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thanks for the critique zanya
Comment from strivinginsc
You followed the rules and format. The photo gave both visual and a reminder of the sound. It is good reminder of the musical of a summer eve, as the insects perform.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
You followed the rules and format. The photo gave both visual and a reminder of the sound. It is good reminder of the musical of a summer eve, as the insects perform.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thanks for reading and the critique zanya
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Thanks
Comment from winnona
a well-written contest entry, You have completed the challenge of the contest well. Cicadas are very interesting insect and I think you captured them well in this entry.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
a well-written contest entry, You have completed the challenge of the contest well. Cicadas are very interesting insect and I think you captured them well in this entry.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend
Nice haiku, it is succinct and it has a clear message. The satori is okay. The presentation is beautiful. Overall this is a great haiku. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
Hello, my friend
Nice haiku, it is succinct and it has a clear message. The satori is okay. The presentation is beautiful. Overall this is a great haiku. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thanks for this vote of confidence. zanya
Comment from Janet Foor
We went throught the 17 -year cycle of the cicadas a few years ago. Theie humming was
deafening.
I liked your insect haiku. Good picture and excellent satori line. Well done
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
We went throught the 17 -year cycle of the cicadas a few years ago. Theie humming was
deafening.
I liked your insect haiku. Good picture and excellent satori line. Well done
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 15-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thanks for this review zanya
Comment from June Sargent
What a delightful image you have painted in this haiku. Little maestros serenading us on a hot summer day. Should do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
What a delightful image you have painted in this haiku. Little maestros serenading us on a hot summer day. Should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Irish Rain
This reminds me of how much I love all the sounds of summer. The bugs, birds, frogs...and the children running and playing. A wonderful haiku, blessings...
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
This reminds me of how much I love all the sounds of summer. The bugs, birds, frogs...and the children running and playing. A wonderful haiku, blessings...
Comment Written 15-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Bobbi22
You know it's summer when you hear those cicadas buzzing. Your haiku paints a clear picture (and sound) of the cicadas in the summer. Very well written. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
You know it's summer when you hear those cicadas buzzing. Your haiku paints a clear picture (and sound) of the cicadas in the summer. Very well written. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thanks for reading zanya