Sadness
Acrostic3 total reviews
Comment from suep
I like that you did this in the form of an acrostic. Good rhyming and flow and alliteration. I especially enjoyed 'Depression, dogged and despairing'. Nice picture choice to accompany your work. Best wishes in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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I like that you did this in the form of an acrostic. Good rhyming and flow and alliteration. I especially enjoyed 'Depression, dogged and despairing'. Nice picture choice to accompany your work. Best wishes in the contest. :)
Comment Written 03-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Thanks for a great review zanya
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. Your words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. I think you have completed the challenge of the contest very well.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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A well-written contest entry. Your words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. I think you have completed the challenge of the contest very well.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Thanks for reading and the critique zanya
Comment from jusylee72
nice acrostic for the sadness contest. It also offers somewhat of a solution at the end of the poem. Beautiful illustration. My favorite line is the line with the alliteration. Thank you for writing.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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nice acrostic for the sadness contest. It also offers somewhat of a solution at the end of the poem. Beautiful illustration. My favorite line is the line with the alliteration. Thank you for writing.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Thanks for reading and the critique zanya
