planet earth congests
Lowku Poem6 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Congratulations on your win, zanya. You have touched upon an important topic. As the world population grows, so does the pollution. The two go hand in hand. Image and words work well together. Marilyn
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Congratulations on your win, zanya. You have touched upon an important topic. As the world population grows, so does the pollution. The two go hand in hand. Image and words work well together. Marilyn
Comment Written 31-Jan-2017
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oH thanks - it's a pleasant suprise to win !!! Thanks for reading zanya
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Thanks - it's such a pleasant surprise to win !!!! Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. The well-chosen words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Good luck in the contest.
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A well-written contest entry. The well-chosen words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the accolade zanya
Comment from Franklin Price
This fully meets the requirements of the contest. Our supposed requirements for much more than we need to exist, are quickly threatening our existence as the population increases. What to do, what to do? Great write
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This fully meets the requirements of the contest. Our supposed requirements for much more than we need to exist, are quickly threatening our existence as the population increases. What to do, what to do? Great write
Comment Written 30-Jan-2017
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from azwildrosa
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What a great read. Your words say so much for being so little. The human rase takes and takes. It breaks my heart watching seeing this world fall about before us. This is a great poem for this prompt. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes to you in the booths.
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What a great read. Your words say so much for being so little. The human rase takes and takes. It breaks my heart watching seeing this world fall about before us. This is a great poem for this prompt. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes to you in the booths.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
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Thanks for this superb review -it's such a big issue for our planet zanya
Comment from kiwisteveh
Yes, some of the things we do to our planet are definitely disgusting, and thus suitable fodder for a Lowku.
Even though we know the dangers, there seems no way to prevent the consumption, and I believe the US has take a massive step backwards in the area of environmental concerns.
Good luck.
Steve
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Yes, some of the things we do to our planet are definitely disgusting, and thus suitable fodder for a Lowku.
Even though we know the dangers, there seems no way to prevent the consumption, and I believe the US has take a massive step backwards in the area of environmental concerns.
Good luck.
Steve
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
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Yes we are so reluctant to change our ways !!thanks for reading zanya
Comment from jusylee72
So true as we watch our earth slowly disappear. We know the consequences with be on our children's children's children. yet we choose to not believe it if it is not in our lifetime.
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So true as we watch our earth slowly disappear. We know the consequences with be on our children's children's children. yet we choose to not believe it if it is not in our lifetime.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
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Yes indeed our children won't thank us !! zanya
