Walker
Texas Ranger3 total reviews
Comment from sunnilicious
Good story. Nice narrative and dialogue. Rope in that man, don't think just do it. There's always enough coffee for one more.... I like your style. Good visual imagery. Cute. Good work. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
Good story. Nice narrative and dialogue. Rope in that man, don't think just do it. There's always enough coffee for one more.... I like your style. Good visual imagery. Cute. Good work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2017
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Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
I never watched much Walker, Texas Ranger, so I'll just have to take your word for how this goes. *smile* But I did notice a few little nits that you might want to correct before the contest judging begins. Here they are:
1.) CD and Alex asked Trivette, "You (ever) going to settle down?"
2.) stare knowing he was full of self-(confidence) and showed no fear.
3.) seemed to look at you like he could see into the windows (of) your soul.
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
Dear Mystery Writer,
I never watched much Walker, Texas Ranger, so I'll just have to take your word for how this goes. *smile* But I did notice a few little nits that you might want to correct before the contest judging begins. Here they are:
1.) CD and Alex asked Trivette, "You (ever) going to settle down?"
2.) stare knowing he was full of self-(confidence) and showed no fear.
3.) seemed to look at you like he could see into the windows (of) your soul.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your support it helps me when someone shows me the way. Don't mind the nits at all.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
A great choice for an episode. Love Walker Texas Ranger. In part, because I live in the Dallas are, and used to live about two miles from his home, but, also, because I have a black belt, so he's been a bit of a hero for years.
You did a great job of writing the script, and in keeping with the characters personalities.
Great job,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
A great choice for an episode. Love Walker Texas Ranger. In part, because I live in the Dallas are, and used to live about two miles from his home, but, also, because I have a black belt, so he's been a bit of a hero for years.
You did a great job of writing the script, and in keeping with the characters personalities.
Great job,
Rhonda
Comment Written 25-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
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So glad this kept your interest and I love walker too he is my hero. I have a friend that is a black belt who is a world famous expert. His name is Lee Norris from Tampa,FLA You may have heard of him. We were neighbors growing up.
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Oh wow, how cool!!
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his name is Lee Norris and he has pictures last I saw on his website
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I'll check it out.
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