Painting Rainbows
Blessings of talking with my girls.15 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful poem you have penned about the rainbows and your daughters. So well said. That is the way I feel when one of my sons call me. They have no idea how special that is to me. Great wording and imagery! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2017
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This is a very beautiful poem you have penned about the rainbows and your daughters. So well said. That is the way I feel when one of my sons call me. They have no idea how special that is to me. Great wording and imagery! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 18-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the lovely review, Teri.
Comment from judiverse
This is so sweet. What would be better than a phone call from one of your children? It's a great way of putting it, to say that they're painting rainbows for you when they call. Their calls really give you a list. It seems better to call that to just email or Tweet or whatever. You have that touch of the human voice, and you can have your conversation. Well stated! judi
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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This is so sweet. What would be better than a phone call from one of your children? It's a great way of putting it, to say that they're painting rainbows for you when they call. Their calls really give you a list. It seems better to call that to just email or Tweet or whatever. You have that touch of the human voice, and you can have your conversation. Well stated! judi
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the review, Judi. I have had rainbows on my mind as on 2 of the 3 Sundays this year on the way to church I have seen morning rainbows.
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Hi, pat and you're welcome. You make a wonderful connection with the family's calls and seeing rainbows. judi
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a lovely poem, Patricia. That's how I feel when my daughter and I go out for our weekly coffee dates--just special time set aside for the two of us. Nicely expressed and touching. Marilyn
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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This is a lovely poem, Patricia. That's how I feel when my daughter and I go out for our weekly coffee dates--just special time set aside for the two of us. Nicely expressed and touching. Marilyn
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the review, Marilyn.
Comment from Sasha
This is absolutely beautiful and conveys the true love you have for your children. I wish I had communication with mine, but, for now, they refuse to talk to me. Very, very nice work with this one.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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This is absolutely beautiful and conveys the true love you have for your children. I wish I had communication with mine, but, for now, they refuse to talk to me. Very, very nice work with this one.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the review, Sasha. I do hope your daughters at some point will realize that their mother is hurt by their actions.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I remember the times my mother would call and I would let it go to voice mail. Now I wish I had every one of those to listen to for my daughters are doing the same to me. When we do talk, it is like colors of the rainbow
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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I remember the times my mother would call and I would let it go to voice mail. Now I wish I had every one of those to listen to for my daughters are doing the same to me. When we do talk, it is like colors of the rainbow
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the review, Barb.
Comment from William Ross
Nice, it is great they call, so many kids move out and you wonder what they are up to. the wife's kids moved out, she had to call them if she wanted to talk. have a great day
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Nice, it is great they call, so many kids move out and you wonder what they are up to. the wife's kids moved out, she had to call them if she wanted to talk. have a great day
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the review, William.
Comment from winnona
A well-written poem. The words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader I think as we grow older we all feel the same way when our grown children call us,
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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A well-written poem. The words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader I think as we grow older we all feel the same way when our grown children call us,
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the review, Winnona.
Comment from brenda bickers
Hi Pat,
what a lovely expression. I wonder how many of us do not realise how precious those little chats are with their mothers. We take each other for granted when all is required is a simple phone call.
This was a nice way of saying how important their contact remains.
Well done.
Brenda:))x
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Hi Pat,
what a lovely expression. I wonder how many of us do not realise how precious those little chats are with their mothers. We take each other for granted when all is required is a simple phone call.
This was a nice way of saying how important their contact remains.
Well done.
Brenda:))x
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the review, Brenda.
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Hi Patricia,
After our children have left the nest, it really does "paint rainbows in our skies" when they come to see us or phone us. It just makes our day!
Your poem is one that most of us can relate well to and identify with. You said it so well!
Thanks for sharing this sweet write!
Connie
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Hi Patricia,
After our children have left the nest, it really does "paint rainbows in our skies" when they come to see us or phone us. It just makes our day!
Your poem is one that most of us can relate well to and identify with. You said it so well!
Thanks for sharing this sweet write!
Connie
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the review, Connie.
Comment from Jackarrie
Hi Patricia
I love your poem, with the beautiful expression of painting rainbows. I feel exactly the same about my three daughters. It is a great way of expressing the joy you receive with simple thoughts as a telephone call. A joy to read.
Well done
Mary
So daughters keep painting rainbows in my skies
For each of you are the greatest in this mom's eyes.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Hi Patricia
I love your poem, with the beautiful expression of painting rainbows. I feel exactly the same about my three daughters. It is a great way of expressing the joy you receive with simple thoughts as a telephone call. A joy to read.
Well done
Mary
So daughters keep painting rainbows in my skies
For each of you are the greatest in this mom's eyes.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2017
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Thank you for the review, Mary.
