Comment from angel123

Excellent

I really like your serious message about your view of the future. It is well written and your artwork choice enhanced your message. Your poem also flows well. Happy New Year!

angel123

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017

Thanks for reading and a great review -Happy New Year zanya

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

So true and a worthy quest. It would be wonderful to leave all these terrible things behind in the new year. Start off fresh and positive with solutions to long lingering problems. First we have to be able to get along with each other. Let's hope we can. Marilyn

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017

Yes indeed - getting along would indeed help so very much lol zanya

Comment from winnona

Excellent

A well-written contest entry. I think you completed the challenge of the contest well. Your words flowed well line to line combining and forming the message of the poem for the reader.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017

Thanks for reading and the critique zanya

Comment from loismddavis

Excellent

you have written a really wonderful hopeful poem that certainly reflects my wishes for the new year. The presentation is lovely and a great match for your poem. You have fulfilled the 25 word limit and I had to count the words twice as you seemed to say so much in those words. Good luck with the contest. good job

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017

Thanks for taking time to read and to review zanya

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Your poem captures the past year and the expectation of the new year. quiet reflection comes forth in your words and hopefully the atmosphere of the country will improve.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017

Thanks for reading and the critique zanya