Disappointment
Left To Fend For Myself16 total reviews
Comment from Selina Stambi
Hello, my dear Barb,
I spend several minutes doing a full review, and lost it. :(
So...oo just want to say congratulations. You have come such a long way. Well done, my dear friend.
Here's wishing you and Gerry good health and joy in the New Year. Hope you had a great Christmas.
Love and hugs,
Sonali xx
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
Hello, my dear Barb,
I spend several minutes doing a full review, and lost it. :(
So...oo just want to say congratulations. You have come such a long way. Well done, my dear friend.
Here's wishing you and Gerry good health and joy in the New Year. Hope you had a great Christmas.
Love and hugs,
Sonali xx
Comment Written 04-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
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time heals all wounds and we are still hope full this rings true for us this year.
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Fingers crossed for you, my dear. I've been away for too long. Glad to be back. Hugs xx
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what have you been doing
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Now that was a bad date!!
Poor you, and he's the one who asked you out.
You didn't even get a good meal out of it.
All I can say is, at least you learned what he was like early on."
Good luck in the contest,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
Now that was a bad date!!
Poor you, and he's the one who asked you out.
You didn't even get a good meal out of it.
All I can say is, at least you learned what he was like early on."
Good luck in the contest,
Rhonda
Comment Written 03-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
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Comment from wilkswrites
What a knucklehead. I'm glad you didn't ponder on him for too long. Would have been a complete waste of time. You wrote well although some of your sentences might need tweaking. I would like to suggest, if I may, that you describe what you looked like that evening. Let your audience know what that clown missed. I really liked your story. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017
What a knucklehead. I'm glad you didn't ponder on him for too long. Would have been a complete waste of time. You wrote well although some of your sentences might need tweaking. I would like to suggest, if I may, that you describe what you looked like that evening. Let your audience know what that clown missed. I really liked your story. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2017
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so glad you enjoyed
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. I tink you have completed the challenge of the contest well. I could only imagine how upsetting it would be to be invited out for dinner then left at the restaurant. Your characters are very life like and realistic,
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
A well-written contest entry. I tink you have completed the challenge of the contest well. I could only imagine how upsetting it would be to be invited out for dinner then left at the restaurant. Your characters are very life like and realistic,
Comment Written 01-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2017
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thank you for your kindness and support
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, that's one of those dates that you aren't ever likely to forget. Of course, silly as it might sound to many, I'm a firm believer in fate. So this very well might be the best thing that could have happened to both of you. Thanks for another fine story. :-)
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2016
Well, that's one of those dates that you aren't ever likely to forget. Of course, silly as it might sound to many, I'm a firm believer in fate. So this very well might be the best thing that could have happened to both of you. Thanks for another fine story. :-)
Comment Written 31-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2016
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thank you for your kindness. Time to ring in another NEW YEAR are you ready?
Comment from GracieAnn
Country,
Feels good for me to be back in the writing and reviewing saddle. LOL.
This The Worst Date Ever writing prompt entry is a strong contender. You've captured the emotions and distress of an uncomfortable disappointment. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
Country,
Feels good for me to be back in the writing and reviewing saddle. LOL.
This The Worst Date Ever writing prompt entry is a strong contender. You've captured the emotions and distress of an uncomfortable disappointment. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 30-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
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so glad you are back and thank you for your kindness and support
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
I enjoyed reading this excellent contest entry. It possessed early drama and then went into great dialogue between the two people. Then it looked as though this would be a great dinner date except Jason hasn't a clue about what he was supposed to be doing instead he invited you for dinner. But, that get blown up to leave you alone at the restaurant.
I wish you good luck in this contest. It is a very enjoyable story to read!
Take care and have a happy New Year,,,,,,,Jim
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
I enjoyed reading this excellent contest entry. It possessed early drama and then went into great dialogue between the two people. Then it looked as though this would be a great dinner date except Jason hasn't a clue about what he was supposed to be doing instead he invited you for dinner. But, that get blown up to leave you alone at the restaurant.
I wish you good luck in this contest. It is a very enjoyable story to read!
Take care and have a happy New Year,,,,,,,Jim
Comment Written 30-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
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thank you for your kindness and your support so glad you enjoyed this
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly. You tell an engaging story which moves along well and draws the reader in to the emotional ups and downs of the day. I wish you all the best in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
This meets the contest requirements splendidly. You tell an engaging story which moves along well and draws the reader in to the emotional ups and downs of the day. I wish you all the best in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
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thank you for your support and your kindness shown to me it means alot
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My pleasure.
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Comment from trumby
This isn't really such a bad date, at least he apologized. This is really nothing compared to some of the bad dates that I've been on. You got off easy if this was your worst date.
You appear to have cleaned up most of the SPAGS.
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
This isn't really such a bad date, at least he apologized. This is really nothing compared to some of the bad dates that I've been on. You got off easy if this was your worst date.
You appear to have cleaned up most of the SPAGS.
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 30-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
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thanks for your support you are the greatest I had help with my spags I hope I caught them all
Comment from Dean Kuch
I understand your protagonist feeling a bit put off by Jason's abrupt departure. But there are some things that simply can't be helped. It didn't sound as if any of what had happened was intentional in any way on Jason's part. He'd simply gotten so excited about asking her out to dinner that he'd forgotten all about his previously agreed to engagement.
Perfectly understandable.
Good story, CWR.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean :)
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
I understand your protagonist feeling a bit put off by Jason's abrupt departure. But there are some things that simply can't be helped. It didn't sound as if any of what had happened was intentional in any way on Jason's part. He'd simply gotten so excited about asking her out to dinner that he'd forgotten all about his previously agreed to engagement.
Perfectly understandable.
Good story, CWR.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean :)
Comment Written 30-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2016
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hey! he just didn't get his priorities straight when he asked her to go to dinner