Comment from winnona

Excellent

a well written contest entry.Your choice of words were perfect and rambled quite well for a good run on sentence. the artwork completed the entry well.I think you completed the challenge of the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2016

Thanks, Winnona. It was fun to do.

Comment from mbroyles2

Excellent

Well you definitely met the contest requirements. I was off an running at the crack of dawn :D
Nice imagery.
Well written.
Happy Holidays
Michael

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016

THank you, Michael. Hope you slow down now. All my days are really rush,rush. Sigh....

Comment from RodG

Excellent

For forty years I fought the Battle of the Run-on with my students, vainly trying to get them to write CONSISTENTLY complete thought sentences properly punctuated. This one is a delightful narrative introducing us to family members who are patriotic, accident prone, and/or star-crossed lovers. Delightful! Rod

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2016

Thanks, Rod. It was no challenge. LOL
I liked the summary of characters you saw in it.

Happy Holidays,
Shari

Comment from Heidi M

Excellent

You really nailed the prompt for the longest run on sentence that still makes sense with this contest entry...and that's the longest run on I can come up with!
Great job!

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2016

Thanks, Heidi. Poor Dennis needs one more entry to get it off the ground. I had fun with this.