Seashells
A gift from the sea32 total reviews
Comment from Poetic Friend
Welcome back, Amada. I am glad to read a new poem from your pen. I miss you and your writing so much.
As a sea lover, I can really appreciate your poem. I LOVE your last line. You have an unique way of conveying your message with cleverness and creativity.
Happy holidays, my friend.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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Welcome back, Amada. I am glad to read a new poem from your pen. I miss you and your writing so much.
As a sea lover, I can really appreciate your poem. I LOVE your last line. You have an unique way of conveying your message with cleverness and creativity.
Happy holidays, my friend.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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Such a tender welcome, I love it, I love it, but then, I am only human. Thank you for missing my writings. I miss my muse as well. But, hope is in the way!
Comment from CEO2020
hmm...I'm still thinking about this one.
"Mermaid-like Christmas trims:
unique gifts from the sea.
On my beach, at high tide
and an irreversible urge to bow down.
Tonight, under my Christmas tree--
the roar of the ocean. "
The ending is where I'm having the problem of connecting
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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hmm...I'm still thinking about this one.
"Mermaid-like Christmas trims:
unique gifts from the sea.
On my beach, at high tide
and an irreversible urge to bow down.
Tonight, under my Christmas tree--
the roar of the ocean. "
The ending is where I'm having the problem of connecting
Comment Written 25-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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Thank you for reading my work, anyway.
Comment from tfawcus
Such a nice connection here between the treasures of the seashore and the decorations of Christmas. Nature does so much better a job at it than we do! My efforts to bend down are sometimes irreversible, too, or nearly so! LOL
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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Such a nice connection here between the treasures of the seashore and the decorations of Christmas. Nature does so much better a job at it than we do! My efforts to bend down are sometimes irreversible, too, or nearly so! LOL
Comment Written 25-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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Nature is so wise...and loving, and forgiving. Easter always come. Thank you for the delightful review that it encouraged me to think.
Comment from bertranclan
A unique way to decorate if I understood you correctly. I like the mermaid imagery and I wish the poem were longer! I'm used to reading only rhyming poetry, but this one really tugged at me!
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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A unique way to decorate if I understood you correctly. I like the mermaid imagery and I wish the poem were longer! I'm used to reading only rhyming poetry, but this one really tugged at me!
Comment Written 24-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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Thank you for reading my short poem and liking the mermaid imagery. It all just came to me in a short walk through the beach, in a beacon of short sun. Your input means a lot to me.
Comment from MelB
A well written poem about Christmas spent by the ocean. Seashells are a unique gift from the sea. The artwork goes perfectly with the poem.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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A well written poem about Christmas spent by the ocean. Seashells are a unique gift from the sea. The artwork goes perfectly with the poem.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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Thank you for reading my work.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Irish Rain
Wow, how unique is this? The roar of the ocean under a Christmas tree! What a most lovely thought!!!This is beautiful, Merry Christmas!!!
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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Wow, how unique is this? The roar of the ocean under a Christmas tree! What a most lovely thought!!!This is beautiful, Merry Christmas!!!
Comment Written 24-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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Thank you for your uplifting comments!
Comment from nancyrabbrose
That is a wonderful poem. I can almost hear the sound of the sea. How clever of you to think of using your seashells as Christmas ornaments. THIS POEM embodies the spirit of Christmas. Well done.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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That is a wonderful poem. I can almost hear the sound of the sea. How clever of you to think of using your seashells as Christmas ornaments. THIS POEM embodies the spirit of Christmas. Well done.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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Thank you. The seashells bow to your open and loving spirit.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I liked this piece. it is almost merging the seasons and shells do make excellent decorations at this time of the year. I live by the sea too and it has a nice tinge to the cold air with the ocean for Christmas.
Nice piece.
GMG
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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Hi there,
I liked this piece. it is almost merging the seasons and shells do make excellent decorations at this time of the year. I live by the sea too and it has a nice tinge to the cold air with the ocean for Christmas.
Nice piece.
GMG
Comment Written 24-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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Thank you for reading my work, GMG!
Comment from Pantygynt
A seaside Christmas by the sound of it. My youngest daughter would like this as she does a lot of driftwood sculpture. If you got together what a fantastic Christmas "tree" the two of you could construct, with a mermaid and a starfish on the top.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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A seaside Christmas by the sound of it. My youngest daughter would like this as she does a lot of driftwood sculpture. If you got together what a fantastic Christmas "tree" the two of you could construct, with a mermaid and a starfish on the top.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2016
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Oh what a talented and sweet daughter you have! I would be honored to work with her, good ness gracious. How old is she? This is such a compliment from your part! Blessings.
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Anna is fifty-two now. She is not into poetry herself but she draws and paints and creates weird and wonderful things from driftwood as well as carving spoons etc. She has worked as a supply teacher for some time since leaving the profession full time a couple of years ago. If you send me your email address I will ask her if she wants to collaborate in some way.
Comment from Ella25
With ocean crash and massive waves are pounding on the shore. Just the way you like it to bring you the surprises. Beautifully crafted in colours, image and wording. Well done. Blessings, Ella
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2016
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With ocean crash and massive waves are pounding on the shore. Just the way you like it to bring you the surprises. Beautifully crafted in colours, image and wording. Well done. Blessings, Ella
Comment Written 23-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2016
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Thank you, Ella, for your lovely review. Merry Christmas!
