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Comment from closetpoetjester
LMAO Well this is the first time I've heard of a non driver getting the ticket but I guess you asked for it haha
Loved your bouncy rhyme complete with convaluted conversation with the fuzz.
Sixer for you, hopefully this makes up for the darn ticket!
Cheers P
What? Not factual? Oh well, you have a terrific imagination. With that said I'm sure there are drivers everywhere that wish THIS scenario WAS possible! Damn Back Seat Drivers!!
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2016
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LMAO Well this is the first time I've heard of a non driver getting the ticket but I guess you asked for it haha
Loved your bouncy rhyme complete with convaluted conversation with the fuzz.
Sixer for you, hopefully this makes up for the darn ticket!
Cheers P
What? Not factual? Oh well, you have a terrific imagination. With that said I'm sure there are drivers everywhere that wish THIS scenario WAS possible! Damn Back Seat Drivers!!
Comment Written 24-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2016
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well, I hope you aren't yanking my six because it wasn't true! (schmile) or liked it any less. None of the stuff I write is true - the fly piece, etc. just havin' fun.
Many,, many thanks!!.
K
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this story about the back seat driver that ended up getting a ticket himself, i enjoyed reading it and wish you the best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016
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this is an excellent write, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this story about the back seat driver that ended up getting a ticket himself, i enjoyed reading it and wish you the best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 22-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2016
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thank you very much for the good wishes! I'm glad you enjoyed it
pome lover
Comment from Stephanie Kastner
Great humor. I think we all have probably experienced the backseat driver at one time or another. I end up driving my husband a lot, but he always has a comment about my driving. I will look at him and say, "You are more than welcome to drive." But he seems to like being a backseat driver much better.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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Great humor. I think we all have probably experienced the backseat driver at one time or another. I end up driving my husband a lot, but he always has a comment about my driving. I will look at him and say, "You are more than welcome to drive." But he seems to like being a backseat driver much better.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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aha! you"figgered" him out! He knows a good deal when he sees it.
thanks for the nice comment.
Comment from CEO2020
Nice work! Good humor and excellent submission for the Writing Prompt contest: Back Seat Driver. I sense the backseat driver is in the driver's mind.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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Nice work! Good humor and excellent submission for the Writing Prompt contest: Back Seat Driver. I sense the backseat driver is in the driver's mind.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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the backseat driver is certainly driving the driver crazy! if that's what you mean. And thank you for the nice comments.
Comment from GoodHearted Woman
Really cute--really clever. Reads in perfect rhythm, but is conversational at the same time. It should be a really fun contest. I'm going to keep tabs on it.
Thanks for posting.
GoodHearted Woman
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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Really cute--really clever. Reads in perfect rhythm, but is conversational at the same time. It should be a really fun contest. I'm going to keep tabs on it.
Thanks for posting.
GoodHearted Woman
Comment Written 21-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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thank you. it didn't format like i thought it would, but am so glad you liked it.
