Comment from cshanley

Excellent

A very good poem. I like how it reflects that the uncertainty of death is not whether or not it is the end of all things, but rather where we go when we leave this stage of our life. It is very thought provoking

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016

Thanks so much, an excellent analysis, blessings, Roy

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

I'm smiling at the wording of this line: "just where...is doubt's reaction." I agree with you that death is a new beginning. At the teensy weensy last second, I guess that bit of doubt creeps in. Hopefully, we will all be signed, sealed and delivered to the right place. :) Marilyn

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2016

Thanks Marilyn for the lovely review, blessings, Roy

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Excellent 3-line poem Roy. Great title to encourage interest and wonderful payoff when the poem is read. Well done.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2016

Thanks Janet for this great review, blessings, Roy

Comment from sandy montgomery

Excellent

Very well done. Great job with the form. I appreciate the difficulty of putting so much into so few words. Great job. Thank you for sharing your work

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2016

Thanks Sandy for this msrvellous review, blessings, Roy

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Roy,

Your poem is wonderful and I agree with every word.
I'm happy to see that your poem has received the ATB award.
I enjoyed reading it even the last line because I know where I will go.

Kat

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2016

Thanks Kat, for these great comments and most encouraging review, blessings, Roy

Comment from N.K. Wagner

Excellent

It's not an adventure if we know all the answers in advance, Roy. Very well done. I enjoyed this bit of philosophy. :) Nancy

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2016

Thanks Nancy, for these generous comments and most encouraging review, blessings, Roy

Comment from Writer51

Excellent

Short but true. The words hit right on the point as to what happens to us in our next beginning. It makes people think. Thanks for jump starting my mind.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2016

Thanks for these generous comments and most encouraging review, blessings, Roy

Comment from Grasshopper2

Excellent

Roy, your three-line poem may be too subtle for many folks. But, I like it. You didn't win this time but tied for second place with a zillion other poets. It seems like there should be a write-off when there's a tie.; some tie breaker finale. Take care.

Always with blessings,
Michael

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2016

Thanks Michael, for these generous comments and most encouraging review, blessings, Roy

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem
it is a perfect match
Just like your words about death. Is not the end as so many thing, it is the being of a new life as Jesus promised/
Cookie

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2016

Thanks Cookie, for these generous comments and most encouraging review, blessings, Roy

reply by misscookie on 07-Nov-2016

You're very welcome, have a nice day.
Cookie

Comment from mrsmajor

Excellent

Yes indeed, for those that have a divine Faith, we still have the chance of everlasting life, once we fall in final sleep...where that will be, only God knows, but there is no question that it will be free from the woes of this world...This poem is truly meaningful, it says much...if we choose to understand it...Thanks for sharing this with us.

Blessings,
Victoria

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2016

Thanks Victoria, for these generous comments and most encouraging review, blessings, Roy

reply by mrsmajor on 06-Nov-2016

You're quite welcome, it was my pleasure!

Blessings!