Study in Blue
And she waits...17 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
It is a beautiful piece of artwork that shows loneliness. Blue is always the color of sadness and loneliness.
Conrgrats on placing in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2017
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It is a beautiful piece of artwork that shows loneliness. Blue is always the color of sadness and loneliness.
Conrgrats on placing in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 18-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2017
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Thank you!
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Any time.
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Comment from zanya
M-m-m how very sad and lonely and perhaps time to move on from this' blue solitude' - beautifully captured here and with an interesting pic
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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M-m-m how very sad and lonely and perhaps time to move on from this' blue solitude' - beautifully captured here and with an interesting pic
Comment Written 14-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2017
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Thank you very much!
Comment from loismddavis
my good ness how well you have described being stood up in a very poetic way. The all blue presentation was also an integral part of the mood you set. I liked your little poem. good job
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016
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my good ness how well you have described being stood up in a very poetic way. The all blue presentation was also an integral part of the mood you set. I liked your little poem. good job
Comment Written 23-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016
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Thank you for your kind comments!
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Awww, how sad to have to sit and wait on your lover when they are expected for supper, or whatever occasion. One thing I can say about my husband, and that's that he's never later for food. lol. He's a farmer. Now, sometimes supper isn't to be expected until the sun goes down.
Never the less, I'm sure there are many who can relate!
As for the poem, it was a beautiful study in blue. The color enhancing the message, and visa versa.
Great job,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016
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Awww, how sad to have to sit and wait on your lover when they are expected for supper, or whatever occasion. One thing I can say about my husband, and that's that he's never later for food. lol. He's a farmer. Now, sometimes supper isn't to be expected until the sun goes down.
Never the less, I'm sure there are many who can relate!
As for the poem, it was a beautiful study in blue. The color enhancing the message, and visa versa.
Great job,
Rhonda
Comment Written 23-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016
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Yes, it is sad to know this feeling of abandonment affects a lot of people. Those of us who are fortunate enough to have someone regularly come home for supper must appreciate it - late or not! Thank you for your fine review.
Comment from barleygirl
This is the poster child for making a short poetic statement that plants volumes of ideas in the reader's mind, as to what it all looks like, feels like, & what it all means. Even if not exactly the romantic interlude described here so well, similar scenarios play out all the time in people's lives. I can almost feel the disappointment when the word "again" is dropped like a ton of bricks.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016
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This is the poster child for making a short poetic statement that plants volumes of ideas in the reader's mind, as to what it all looks like, feels like, & what it all means. Even if not exactly the romantic interlude described here so well, similar scenarios play out all the time in people's lives. I can almost feel the disappointment when the word "again" is dropped like a ton of bricks.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016
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Thank you so much for your insightful review!
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A great poem. I invited a girl to come for dinner once. I prepared a lovely meal, put on some romantic music and set out two wine glasses. She didn't show.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2016
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A great poem. I invited a girl to come for dinner once. I prepared a lovely meal, put on some romantic music and set out two wine glasses. She didn't show.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2016
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Glad you got the gist of it. Thanks for the positive feedback.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Cinquain. The untouched glasses a picture of blue solitude. In the background hear the mournful music playing. An excellent artwork to compliment your poem.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2016
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A very well-written Cinquain. The untouched glasses a picture of blue solitude. In the background hear the mournful music playing. An excellent artwork to compliment your poem.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2016
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Thank you for your encouraging words.
Comment from Ogden
I love this poem! It not only fulfills the requirements of the cinquain form, but does so with singleminded focus. I believe the meaningful relationship between the first and last lines is not a coincidence.
Good luck in the contest!
Don
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2016
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I love this poem! It not only fulfills the requirements of the cinquain form, but does so with singleminded focus. I believe the meaningful relationship between the first and last lines is not a coincidence.
Good luck in the contest!
Don
Comment Written 07-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2016
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Thank you so much. I was trying to create a mood based on two glasses and what might have been the expectations. Alone again. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Irish Rain
Well this is just lovely. Quite aptly named, every word sparkles like the glasses. Best of luck to you, don't think you'll need it, blessings....
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2016
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Well this is just lovely. Quite aptly named, every word sparkles like the glasses. Best of luck to you, don't think you'll need it, blessings....
Comment Written 06-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2016
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Writer51
This is great. Everything about it, picture, as well as, wording, fit perfectly. It has a very strong message that is quite clear. Not only is the message clear, but it leaves a solid feeling of sadness.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2016
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This is great. Everything about it, picture, as well as, wording, fit perfectly. It has a very strong message that is quite clear. Not only is the message clear, but it leaves a solid feeling of sadness.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2016
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Thank you for your positive feedback!
