Remembering
The Memories9 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
What a wonderful uplifting piece and a magnificient testimony for those that need the knowledge that they too can survive if they just try.
I love the content and the positive attitude in this piece
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2016
What a wonderful uplifting piece and a magnificient testimony for those that need the knowledge that they too can survive if they just try.
I love the content and the positive attitude in this piece
Comment Written 20-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2016
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Thank you for your kindness thank you for your kindness thank you for liking this piece
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
We all overcome obstacles but some face more obstacles than others. We all probably have that one thing we'd change but it's nice to focus on the positive. You did a great job and good luck with the upcoming surgery.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2016
We all overcome obstacles but some face more obstacles than others. We all probably have that one thing we'd change but it's nice to focus on the positive. You did a great job and good luck with the upcoming surgery.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2016
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thank you and it is my pleasure to see you enjoy another one of my stories.
Comment from Ric Myworld
We never know what we might have to go through on this old earth and sometimes it just breaks our hearts to watch those we love and care about have to suffer. Thanks for sharing another of your fine stories. :-)
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2016
We never know what we might have to go through on this old earth and sometimes it just breaks our hearts to watch those we love and care about have to suffer. Thanks for sharing another of your fine stories. :-)
Comment Written 19-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2016
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thank you for your kindness
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you walk us through how trials have actually turned out to be blessings of hope. Strength certainly does come from communing quietly with nature and you have taken full advantage of that throughout your life. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2016
This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you walk us through how trials have actually turned out to be blessings of hope. Strength certainly does come from communing quietly with nature and you have taken full advantage of that throughout your life. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2016
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thank you for your kindness it means a lot to me
Comment from joeruptak
I enjoyed this very much . It is a very well written piece about your life and what you what you would like the rest of it to be.
Everything you have written leads me to believe that you are
my kind of people.
Good job, your postings are always a good read
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2016
I enjoyed this very much . It is a very well written piece about your life and what you what you would like the rest of it to be.
Everything you have written leads me to believe that you are
my kind of people.
Good job, your postings are always a good read
Comment Written 19-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2016
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thank you so much for your kindness
Comment from c_lucas
We were given intelligence to work out most of our problems and to turn to a higher intelligence to work out those beyond our means.
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I learned the (they) are human
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2016
We were given intelligence to work out most of our problems and to turn to a higher intelligence to work out those beyond our means.
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I learned the (they) are human
Comment Written 19-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2016
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thanks again pal
Comment from DR DIP
That's a wonderful story Mom and like always it's straight from the heart. Reminiscing and remembering is an important part of our lives. Your story is so heartfelt. Thankyou for sharing Mom and could luck for the future.
dip
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2016
That's a wonderful story Mom and like always it's straight from the heart. Reminiscing and remembering is an important part of our lives. Your story is so heartfelt. Thankyou for sharing Mom and could luck for the future.
dip
Comment Written 19-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2016
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thanks son-------thinking of you
Comment from mfowler
This is a very honest account of an honest life. Your balance of good news and challenges reflects what most human life is about. You mention the struggles and recognise these are points of struggle that help us to become stronger.
My favourite part of this is what you said about spending time with God in the forest. There's no better place on earth than among beauty, espcially natural beauty. It's a place to be silent, to take stock, to pray and to appreciate.
Your grandfather sounds like he was a wonderful man and I think, as a person who had one of those, they are the adults that show us the kindest love if they're so inclined. As you said, he didn't judge and he shared the wisdom of life. Parents often love us even more but are caught up in moving on with jobs and homes and hopes. The grandparents have been there, done that, and had time to weigh up what's worthwhile.
Thank you for sharing your story and I hope you do well in the competition.
Some spags:
in ones life. ... one's
new prospective ... new perspective
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2016
This is a very honest account of an honest life. Your balance of good news and challenges reflects what most human life is about. You mention the struggles and recognise these are points of struggle that help us to become stronger.
My favourite part of this is what you said about spending time with God in the forest. There's no better place on earth than among beauty, espcially natural beauty. It's a place to be silent, to take stock, to pray and to appreciate.
Your grandfather sounds like he was a wonderful man and I think, as a person who had one of those, they are the adults that show us the kindest love if they're so inclined. As you said, he didn't judge and he shared the wisdom of life. Parents often love us even more but are caught up in moving on with jobs and homes and hopes. The grandparents have been there, done that, and had time to weigh up what's worthwhile.
Thank you for sharing your story and I hope you do well in the competition.
Some spags:
in ones life. ... one's
new prospective ... new perspective
Comment Written 19-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2016
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thank you for your kindness and the heads up on the typos
Comment from damommy
You sound like a person who has come to terms with life and are happy with it. So am I.
I really liked this piece, but it needs some punctuation, and a couple of places, the sentence runs on.
Keep writing. I can see you have a gift. 8-)
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2016
You sound like a person who has come to terms with life and are happy with it. So am I.
I really liked this piece, but it needs some punctuation, and a couple of places, the sentence runs on.
Keep writing. I can see you have a gift. 8-)
Comment Written 19-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2016
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show me please where to make the corrections
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I'll send it by your private message.
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ok