Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Very well done and a perfect tanka.
The idea of leaving ones homeland hoping for a better life is universal.
I just hope this new election coming up turns out good

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 Comment Written 05-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2016

Thanks, Barb.

It's an ongoing tragedy - no end in sight.

Steve