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Will Promised a Thrill

Where there's a will, there's another way

24 total reviews 
Comment from sunnilicious
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Ooo well that is a limerick if I ever read one. Great visual imagery created. Creative. Funny. Good flow of rhythm and rhyming. Well thought out and nicely written. Glad you won the contest. Have a nice weekend :)

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2017

reply by the author on 11-Mar-2017
    Thank you for the encouragement and congrats. - . It was fun to write.

    Blessings and have a good weekend.
    Janet
Comment from brianpage
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Ha ha ha. I laughed out loud at this one. Great sense of humor and so plausible!
Limericks are my favorite form of poetry and this one is particularly well written. Thank you for sharing.

Brian

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2017

reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
    Thank you Brian. This was such fun to write. I'm so pleased that you liked it.

    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from Domino 2
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This is a PROPER limerick, following the traditional bawdy content, Janet, and congratulations on your win.

Excellent anapaestic meter and required perfect rhymes.

Naughty without being offensively crude.

Clever double-meaning/usage of, 'Will'.

I hope 'Will's noodle' recovered some life eventually (even with the pill's aid), and the vibrator's batteries still had some 'life' in them in the meantime. ;-)

Excellent.

Cheers, Ray xx


 Comment Written 04-Sep-2016

reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
    Thank you Ray for your fun and funny review. I've only written a few limericks. This one was really fun.

    Hope you are having a good weekend.

    Blessings
    Janet xx
Comment from The Death
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Hi Janet,

Congratulations on winning the contest! Well-deserved! I find nothing refreshing about the limericks posted here, but yours is an exception.

Your limerick is true to the form, with fine rhymes and the bonus of internal rhyme with Will. Also, a clever choice to willingly go for the word Will LOL. It makes sense and it's aptly bold as it should be - nothing too vulagr. I enjoyed reading it.

Regards,
Anupam

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2016

reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
    Thank you Anupam for the congratulations and fun review.
    I was happy to win but the bar wasn't too high for this one.



    I have only written a few limericks, not really my genre, but this was fun..

    Blessings

    Janet


Comment from Gloria ....
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Haaa, I can see why you won the Limerick contest with this little beauty, Janet. Perfect to the limerick form and a little bit bawdy, but nothing too naughty, so congratulations to you.

HAHA. Got a good chuckle.

Gloria

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2016

reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
    Thank you Gloria for your fun review and congratulation . It was a little out of my comfort zone but also a lot of fun. haha

    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from Amy Greta
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Now that's funny and I'm actually smiling right now...I love it. Perfect rhyme (even in the middle of the line with Will) flowing syllables, very engaging, and the ending is in pure limerick form with a little naughty twist.
Exceptional!
Amy

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2016

reply by the author on 04-Sep-2016
    Thank you Amy for your encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments.

    Blessings
Comment from BeasPeas
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I'm LOL with this cute limerick. Clever and well written to bring a smile. Each line is appropriate and progresses your little story. Great rhyming with canoodle/noodle. Flow and cadence are perfect. A very good entry for the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2016

reply by the author on 03-Sep-2016
    Thank you Marilyn. This was fun to write.
Comment from winnona
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A well-written contest entry. Your well-chosen words flowed together well combining and forming the message of the poem for the reader. I think you have completed the challenge of the poem well.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2016

reply by the author on 03-Sep-2016
    Thank you. This was fun to write.
Comment from Cynthia1
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Oh, that Will...can't fill the bill. Your poem is cute- a limerick indeed. I think that you have met the requirements of the contest and you have done so with much humor. Good luck in the contest.
Cynthia1

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2016

reply by the author on 03-Sep-2016
    Thank you. This was fun to write.
Comment from oliver818
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Haha great little poem. Subtle in its imagery, yet quite lively and licencious at the same time. A nice little Limerick!
Good luck for the competition and thanks for the share!

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2016

reply by the author on 03-Sep-2016
    Thank you. This was fun to write.