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An Ode to Miss Cookie

An alliteration poem, re-edited.

13 total reviews 
Comment from Ginger Banks
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Yum, a buttery flaky biscuit, it sounds wonderful and if Miss Cookie makes them, I'd love to have one. I'm a sucker for well-made biscuits, mashed potatoes and gravy. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week. Apologies for my lengthy absence.
reply by Ginger Banks on 25-Jul-2016
    You're welcome.
Comment from Teri7
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This is really sweet what you have written for misscookie. She does write very delightful poems and stories. Good luck in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week. Apologies for my lengthy absence.
Comment from sage17611
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I like how you wrote about some of the good qualities of MissCookie. She sounds like a real family woman who treasures her grandchildren. Your poem has a nice flow, although short, I'm sure MissCookie would be honored. Good job with this write.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice week.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from foxangie123
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She is just that and then some. A most beautiful and bright glow she has indeed. She is angelic and one to follow. I love this and thank you for entering my contest. This Rocks my friend.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from Nika2016
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Your love shines through the lines and she seems like a nice lady and everybody's mama...
I know holidays are rockin' at her house with family and friends.
Xxxxxxxxx

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from mvbrooks
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Fun alliteration and a sense of tongue-twister makes this a fun read and the imagery makes it a memory connection to one's youth. The "enjoy everyone" last line seems more of an acknowledgment than a request because the reader has experience this (or a similar memory) by the poem's end.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from GoodHearted Woman
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So, you are taking your alliteration out for a stroll today. Better count them so they
all come back with you! That had to be a fun exercise for you, besides paying tribute to this memorable friend. Fun piece to read. I enjoyed it very much. I couldn't wait to see what you were going to come up with next!!!
GoodHearted Woman

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from lfemine
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That's a charming poem. It speaks of the warm, loving days of family gatherings and what they should be like. I remember them - and all the cookies :) Is that a picture of Miss Cookie?

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week. Yes, it is a photo of her.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A well-written ode to miss Cookie. Her work is always high quality and interesting. The buttery biscuits is a great bonus, I also wish I could go visit.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and nice Sunday. I wish that too-LOL. stem?
Comment from William Ross
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This is good on miss cookie and her love for making homemade biscuits, besides her being a good spiritual writer. good luck on this and have a great day

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and nice Sunday.