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Come to me

A bit of fun

39 total reviews 
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Exceptional
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Missy, the artwork you chose adds to this exceptional piece of very sensual poetry! I enjoyed the thought provoking and very poignant message and moments of your poem!

Very well thought through and written my newest friend.

Best regards,

Jim

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2016


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
    I want to first apologize, Jim for the length of time to my reply to your lovely review. It has been a long year and then some.

    Missy
Comment from pattipac
Exceptional
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LOL, so glad you decided to pass your sensual poem about an Oreo. You have a gift with words that pull us in, tickle our senses, then Slap us back into reality.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
    I feel blessed to be able to come back and see this lovely review, Pat. Thank you so very much!

    Missy
Comment from BOO ghost
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Haha! I had not a clue what you were talking about until I reached the middle of the Oreo below. I would classify this as a sensual poem, indeed. Wonder what a devil foods cookie would had been like? Bad ghost, silly me -- BOO. Maybe made the cookie smile. Good way to die. Yes, BOO could use a midnight snack... hum, what would it be at this twilight hour? Maybe some BOO Berry cereal? Yummy! Give you what I got left? BOO!

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2016


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2017
    Hahaha!! Love this! I am so sorry for being gone so long but, life has a way of shoving us away from what we love. :(

    Missy
Comment from evilynne
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You made me smile and giggle as well. I didn't get it until almost the end. You certainly did get sensuous about food! Sorry, I don't have a sixer now. Evi

 Comment Written 17-May-2016


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
    Blessings to you for your review and your patience while it took so long to respond.

    Always
    Justafan
    Missy
Comment from l.raven
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HI Miss, LMBO you...you had me going there for a minute...this is great...you just have to love those Oreo's...very well written sweet girl...still laughing...love your poem...and a great picture...Love ya Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 13-May-2016


reply by the author on 16-May-2016
    HI, sweet Linda, I have been away at a wedding but have returned. Thank you for leaving this even though I don't think it still was awarding any fanstory bucks.

    Missy xx
reply by l.raven on 16-May-2016
    I don't care what they pay...as long as I enjoy them...and I do...I hope you had fun at the wedding...and you are so welcome....xxoo Linda love ya
Comment from Bill O'Bier
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Hello Missy:
I enjoyed this sultry and delicious fun poem a lot. The arrangement is creative and leads up to a great surprise. Nice photo too.

Wishing you all the best-
Bill

 Comment Written 13-May-2016


reply by the author on 16-May-2016
    Bill, thank you, sweet man for leaving me this lovely Review that brought a smile to my face.

    Missy
Comment from michaelcahill
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It's a strange thing, ever since I changed my name to "Oreo" I've noticed my popularity has risen quite a bit. Now, this lovely poem dedicated to me. I must say, it's rather steamy and I'd be lying if I didn't admit to being a bit intrigued. I guess I'm a little nervous that you'll be disappointed when you discover that I'm not actually a cookie. mikey

 Comment Written 12-May-2016


reply by the author on 13-May-2016
    And here I thought your name was Lucious!! You do make me smile, Mikey :) Thank you, for this brilliant review!

    Missy
Comment from sage17611
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I like the description of your desire for the Oreo, lol. Who won the challenge?
Your poem is very creative, and sensual with a surprise ending. The poem flows nicely, and erotically, this is a fun read, thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-May-2016


reply by the author on 12-May-2016
    More of a "go write this" than a one on one challenge. He gave me the suggestion for the first write in my new tablet.

    Thank you, Sage.

    Always justafan,
    MIssy
Comment from Douglas Paul
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LOl you really had me going with this one. The picture set the misleading tone and you carried it well throughout the poem, which turned out to a fantastic description of the Oreo - my favorite cookie

 Comment Written 12-May-2016


reply by the author on 13-May-2016
    Good morning, Douglas. Thank you for stopping by and leaving this review, which brought a smile to my face.

    Missy
Comment from Kooky Clown
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What a great poem with a lovely twist in it's tail I just loved it. I think it is well thought out and very clever I particularly liked the way that I had to scroll down to see the last line it made it for me.

 Comment Written 12-May-2016


reply by the author on 13-May-2016
    Hi, KC, I want to thank you for leaving me this sweet review :)

    Missy