Musings Of My Muddled Mind
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Untitled"NaPoWriMo April 2016
15 total reviews
Comment from closetpoetjester
Hmmm...a flimsy attempt to disguise this as garden porn me thinks haha
Loved this sexy sultry bouquet of nectar...nothing like getting, dare I say in "touch" with nature?! haha
Well penned you seductive sauce-eress LOL Nice to see you're inspired with a little heat around the place. Hopefully it's the right place. The tongue is a wonderful tool and has MANY uses. Yes, siree haha.
Anyway, a very in depth and thoughtfully constructed and expressed poem, Debs. Well done, my friend. I am NOT so sure your musings are THAT muddled LOL
Hugs P
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PS Not sure why you named this as you did with "Untitled"...maybe Nature's Nectar or Petalled Porn haha
Kidding...the name means jack. It's all about the juicy content!
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2016
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Hmmm...a flimsy attempt to disguise this as garden porn me thinks haha
Loved this sexy sultry bouquet of nectar...nothing like getting, dare I say in "touch" with nature?! haha
Well penned you seductive sauce-eress LOL Nice to see you're inspired with a little heat around the place. Hopefully it's the right place. The tongue is a wonderful tool and has MANY uses. Yes, siree haha.
Anyway, a very in depth and thoughtfully constructed and expressed poem, Debs. Well done, my friend. I am NOT so sure your musings are THAT muddled LOL
Hugs P
x
PS Not sure why you named this as you did with "Untitled"...maybe Nature's Nectar or Petalled Porn haha
Kidding...the name means jack. It's all about the juicy content!
Comment Written 09-May-2016
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2016
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A belated thank you :)
Comment from Lulube
This is a very seductive poem. I guess if you can't read between the lines it is a very good descriptive poem regarding the photo but I can feel a difference or maybe it's withdrawls from my relationship upstairs. lol
good job
lulube
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2016
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This is a very seductive poem. I guess if you can't read between the lines it is a very good descriptive poem regarding the photo but I can feel a difference or maybe it's withdrawls from my relationship upstairs. lol
good job
lulube
Comment Written 04-May-2016
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2016
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A belated thank you :)
Comment from William Ross
Hmmm tantalizing for sure, maybe a good name. exotic, great little tantalizing piece. Thanks for the thoughts, have a great day
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Hmmm tantalizing for sure, maybe a good name. exotic, great little tantalizing piece. Thanks for the thoughts, have a great day
Comment Written 01-May-2016
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a well-written sensuous poem. You have done a wonderful job with this. Presentation and word choices are perfect. Congratulations. It rates a six. Marilyn
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This is a well-written sensuous poem. You have done a wonderful job with this. Presentation and word choices are perfect. Congratulations. It rates a six. Marilyn
Comment Written 01-May-2016
Comment from misscookie
The artwork you choose to go with your poem is lovely
And your words are a perfect match.
Thank you for this delightful poem
Cookie
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The artwork you choose to go with your poem is lovely
And your words are a perfect match.
Thank you for this delightful poem
Cookie
Comment Written 01-May-2016
Comment from Leineco
Great final poem for your book Debra - Freudian innuendo at
it's best ;-)
And so the final poem is writ
upon this journey Kim set off
we've shared our hearts, our art, our wit -
to each who played, my hat I doff :-)
We've seen odes penned to poets
and Mother Goose re-imagined.
Seen faces of love and Elvis refits;
even thrilled at a travelogue whirlwind.
We've witnessed inspired ekphrasis
and devotion to meter and rhymes.
Seen exhibitions of muse on the fritz
and explored both beginnings...and troubled times.
Observations and reflections led the way
as we practiced poetic endeavors
and many a new form was put on display!
Reading these works has been such a pleasure!!!
(over 550 postings guys! And that's without
counting our ride along partners [like Joy Graham and
tfawcus] in this project :-)
P.S. Please know I did read every poem posted...I just
lacked the ability and time to review all of them.
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Great final poem for your book Debra - Freudian innuendo at
it's best ;-)
And so the final poem is writ
upon this journey Kim set off
we've shared our hearts, our art, our wit -
to each who played, my hat I doff :-)
We've seen odes penned to poets
and Mother Goose re-imagined.
Seen faces of love and Elvis refits;
even thrilled at a travelogue whirlwind.
We've witnessed inspired ekphrasis
and devotion to meter and rhymes.
Seen exhibitions of muse on the fritz
and explored both beginnings...and troubled times.
Observations and reflections led the way
as we practiced poetic endeavors
and many a new form was put on display!
Reading these works has been such a pleasure!!!
(over 550 postings guys! And that's without
counting our ride along partners [like Joy Graham and
tfawcus] in this project :-)
P.S. Please know I did read every poem posted...I just
lacked the ability and time to review all of them.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2016
Comment from I am Cat
Sounds like you're channeling Georgia O'Keefe (A Texas artist known for painting large canvases of flowers, close up, heralding the fact that they look exactly like female genitalia) lol ;)
Very erotic, and yet... it's just nature. ;)
WEll done... love the word choices
Cat
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Sounds like you're channeling Georgia O'Keefe (A Texas artist known for painting large canvases of flowers, close up, heralding the fact that they look exactly like female genitalia) lol ;)
Very erotic, and yet... it's just nature. ;)
WEll done... love the word choices
Cat
Comment Written 30-Apr-2016
Comment from krys123
Hello Debra;
-as I see the picture of the moth or maybe look like a butterfly sticking his proboscis into the flower which is very appropriate, relative and supportive to the conceptual theme of your writing but also described very well to the imagery of your writing which is very definitively expressive and vividly descriptive.
-I enjoyed the video beautiful music along with the clouds and the stars.
- thank you for sharing and posting and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
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Hello Debra;
-as I see the picture of the moth or maybe look like a butterfly sticking his proboscis into the flower which is very appropriate, relative and supportive to the conceptual theme of your writing but also described very well to the imagery of your writing which is very definitively expressive and vividly descriptive.
-I enjoyed the video beautiful music along with the clouds and the stars.
- thank you for sharing and posting and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 30-Apr-2016
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
what a double meaning and referral.
I looked at the picture and saw the sights of nature, then I looked at the picture of the video and saw the sights of love.
Very nice description meaning two entirely different things but both true.
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what a double meaning and referral.
I looked at the picture and saw the sights of nature, then I looked at the picture of the video and saw the sights of love.
Very nice description meaning two entirely different things but both true.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2016
Comment from YvonneAguilar
The photos and the captures very deep emotions which you are trying to convey in the picture. It is a moment in time which you are able to live over and over again. thank you for sharing
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The photos and the captures very deep emotions which you are trying to convey in the picture. It is a moment in time which you are able to live over and over again. thank you for sharing
Comment Written 30-Apr-2016
