Love Is Oblivion
Palindrome in free form free verse27 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Okay, I've read this one now, and yes, it is a really good one, you really are good at these and it's still better than any other one I've read ... Bar one! The one you didn't enter!! Still think you have written the winning one, so, GOOD LUCK!! xxxx
reply by the author on 06-May-2016
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Okay, I've read this one now, and yes, it is a really good one, you really are good at these and it's still better than any other one I've read ... Bar one! The one you didn't enter!! Still think you have written the winning one, so, GOOD LUCK!! xxxx
Comment Written 06-May-2016
reply by the author on 06-May-2016
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"An Inseparable One" is the one I wish I would've entered.
I'm so happy you liked this one though. These things are ridiculous. I'm not sure the site is looking for something like this. I think they like more conventional things. But, I'm happy with the Sandra Mitchell award. You've got better taste!! mikey
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Of course, I totally agree with you! LOL. You will win, Mikey. I've already placed my bet. :))
Comment from Ima L. Ami
I love the way the words are written out with so much artist expression. The colors and changes in font add credence to the words that are written. Great job with this powerful message.
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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I love the way the words are written out with so much artist expression. The colors and changes in font add credence to the words that are written. Great job with this powerful message.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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Oh, thanks so much. This thing was a bear to write and I spent hours on it. I'm so pleased you liked it. Palindrome. Jeesh. What a cruel invention. LOL mikey
Comment from l.raven
HI Michael, behind...hummmm...I love this you...Michael all your poems make a reader stop and think...how that moment would be...I tried to fins a favorite line...but they all are...moments frozen...and embracing warming...faces smiling...feel the heat...you so have a way with words...I love it you...your pictures...or colors and your poem sweet boy...luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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HI Michael, behind...hummmm...I love this you...Michael all your poems make a reader stop and think...how that moment would be...I tried to fins a favorite line...but they all are...moments frozen...and embracing warming...faces smiling...feel the heat...you so have a way with words...I love it you...your pictures...or colors and your poem sweet boy...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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Hi, Linda
Trying to catch up. I'm so pleased you liked this. Wow. So difficult. Jeesh. Thanks so much Ms. Sweetorama Sweepstakes Winner. mikey
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Hi Michael, I am going to write down all the wonderful sweets you have named me...put them in a jar...and save them...because they make me smile...and laugh...thank you sweet boy...and you are so welcome... I am always trying to catch up...LOL...hugs to ya...xxoo Linda
Comment from Sefiros
I like the slanted way you distributed to your lines. It gave them a uniqueness and overall flow to the story that you were creating. The decision of the blue shade (not to mention the blue flower) added depth that ordinary poems lack. Good job.
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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I like the slanted way you distributed to your lines. It gave them a uniqueness and overall flow to the story that you were creating. The decision of the blue shade (not to mention the blue flower) added depth that ordinary poems lack. Good job.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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Thank you so much. This is a difficult form, the palindrome. I you'll take a close look you'll see that the poem reads the same forwards and backwards. Thanks so much, mikey
Comment from boxergirl
Mikey...wow...awesome job with this very difficult palindrome. The picture and the presentation add to its appeal and your message is about love is spot on...both forward and backward!! 8-)
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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Mikey...wow...awesome job with this very difficult palindrome. The picture and the presentation add to its appeal and your message is about love is spot on...both forward and backward!! 8-)
Comment Written 26-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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Whew! Thanks a trillion. This is an insane form. I'm so thrilled you liked this. I've NEVER worked so hard on something before in my life. Jeesh. I don't think I'll stop smiling for a while. It's been five days and I'm still smiling. Sorry to be late in responding. Thanks a bunch. mikey
Comment from lightink
Wow! You did a miracle with the formatting, Mikey - not to mention the amazing wording! I didn't realize this was a palindrome until the very end!
Beautiful! Well done!
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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Wow! You did a miracle with the formatting, Mikey - not to mention the amazing wording! I didn't realize this was a palindrome until the very end!
Beautiful! Well done!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 02-May-2016
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Really? Wow. That's so awesome to hear. Wow. I have to stick around to see if anything has developed. THanks so much.
mikey
Comment from Gloria ....
You have done a fabulous job with your palindrome, Mav. It reads beautifully both ways and I suppose that we have learned something from this exercise that is how words interplay with one another.
Your entire presentation is a work of art and the profound truth in the words is incredible. It does feel like falling into an abyss when love's embers embrace oblivion.
Beautiful job and best wishes to you in the contest.
Ange.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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You have done a fabulous job with your palindrome, Mav. It reads beautifully both ways and I suppose that we have learned something from this exercise that is how words interplay with one another.
Your entire presentation is a work of art and the profound truth in the words is incredible. It does feel like falling into an abyss when love's embers embrace oblivion.
Beautiful job and best wishes to you in the contest.
Ange.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2016
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I always wonder, Angel, if meaning gets through when I write. It's so satisfying to hear you describe my thoughts and words with such clarity, maybe more than I possess myself. This was such as task compared to knocking off a ten minute sonnet. LOL! I truly did labor over each little space and font size trying to guide the eye exactly the way I wanted it guided.
My very favorite poet likes it and approves. I need know nothing else. Love,
Maverick
Comment from ~Dovey
Mikey!!!
This is a beauty! I know what time and energy it takes to write a palindrome, and this was no easy feat. The blood and sweat you put into this one gets you a six, hands down! :) Wishing you all the best in the contest!
(Your last image didn't attach, might want to have a look)
Fantastic work!
Kim
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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Mikey!!!
This is a beauty! I know what time and energy it takes to write a palindrome, and this was no easy feat. The blood and sweat you put into this one gets you a six, hands down! :) Wishing you all the best in the contest!
(Your last image didn't attach, might want to have a look)
Fantastic work!
Kim
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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Hi, Kim
Wow. What high praise and you are so correct. Gee WHIZ. This was no ten minute sonnet that's for sure. I'm so honored you liked this and understand how much I put everything into it. That makes me feel like a million bucks. Well, a million and SIX!!! Photobucket crashed. Everyone's downloads are off line. HAVOC! Poor RSpoet's piece on the first page, first slot says "OOPS". Poor thing. Jeesh. Thanks so much, mikey
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I have a Palindrome in my NaPoWriMo book and a couple in my portfolio, I totally get it! lol :) Yours is truly a beauty, Mikey!
Kim
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Yes, I love the falling format you've used, I think it does add to the drama of the words. In the first -love eternal love -
really stands out in your format. Great Palindrome, lovely words, and the format really does add to it. I guess it took some time working out how and where to place them. Well done mikey and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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Yes, I love the falling format you've used, I think it does add to the drama of the words. In the first -love eternal love -
really stands out in your format. Great Palindrome, lovely words, and the format really does add to it. I guess it took some time working out how and where to place them. Well done mikey and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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Whew! This was a chore and a half. I've never found anything as difficult to do as this palindrome THING! LOL
I'm so relieved and pleased to hear you enjoyed it. Wow. That just makes my day. Thanks a million, mikey
Comment from Domino 2
Very interesting notes, Mikey, and I absolutely agree with most of what you say regarding the aim of free verse.
However, I find all the fancy (and very clever) presentation to be distracting and it STOPS my flow of mind and ability to pause and ponder.
Anyway, I know I'm an 'in the minority freak'. ;-)
I'm certainly NOT trying to have a dig at you, as I respect you very much, but I also find the multi-use of ing-ending gerunds make for a 'passive' rather than 'active' read.
Of course, this is a contemplation based a lot on the past experiences of love, so it's hard to make it 'here and now' for extra imagery and drama.
Thought-provoking and very unusual write, and that's meant to be a compliment. :-)
Cheers, my friend. Ray.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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Very interesting notes, Mikey, and I absolutely agree with most of what you say regarding the aim of free verse.
However, I find all the fancy (and very clever) presentation to be distracting and it STOPS my flow of mind and ability to pause and ponder.
Anyway, I know I'm an 'in the minority freak'. ;-)
I'm certainly NOT trying to have a dig at you, as I respect you very much, but I also find the multi-use of ing-ending gerunds make for a 'passive' rather than 'active' read.
Of course, this is a contemplation based a lot on the past experiences of love, so it's hard to make it 'here and now' for extra imagery and drama.
Thought-provoking and very unusual write, and that's meant to be a compliment. :-)
Cheers, my friend. Ray.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2016
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This is the WORST form ever invented. LOL
Yeah, too many bells and whistles and I admit I'm fudging the issue a bit with them. I should have gone with longer lines, they're easier to reverse. But I thought I'd try this to see if I could do it. Well, it seems like I didn't totally fall off the cliff. You're right about the "ings" too. To be honest they read better reversed for some reason than the more active version. HAHAHA! Thwarted at every turn.
I delighted that it still managed to grab you and give you a good read. I think I'll go write a sonnet!!! Thanks so much, mikey
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Thanks for your great fun and very gracious reply, Mikey.
All the best, Ray.
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I apologise for missing this was a palindrome, Mikey. EXCEEDINGLY clever now the penny has dropped. It MUST be, as it was so un-forced I didn't notice ;-)
