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Musings Of My Muddled Mind

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NaPoWriMo April 2016

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Comment from Lulube
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Cute poem and I'm glad that you two got some time away and alone. Might try a fatter, wider seat, I hate those skinny ones, they do leave saddle sores. or fatten up the bum for padding. lol leg squats.

lulube

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2016
    LOL! Thanks Lulube :) I think a comfy seat is in order...got enough padding on my behind! Cheers! Debs x
reply by Lulube on 06-Apr-2016
    me too

    lulube
Comment from BeasPeas
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What an interesting and fun birthday. To go on a bike ride with your hubby is a great present. It's nice he does things like that. Mine never did. It sounds like your tea was yummy. A happy birthday for you despite the aches after the ride. Thanks for sharing your day with us. :) Marilyn

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2016
    Thanks so much, Marilyn :) I had a lovely day! Best wishes, Debra x
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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LOL!! That looks painful! I gave up my indoor exercise bike because it hurt my bum, riding that far, my goodness, I wouldn't be able to walk for a month! I am so pleased you enjoyed your day together, Debra, I hope you have loads more! xsx Sandra

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
    Me too, Sandra :) Thank you for your lovely feedback, much love, Debra :)
Comment from frogbook
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This is a cute one with a great rhyming quality as well as the excellent humor. Maybe a pillow on top of the little seat cover?-haha.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
    Good idea! Thank you for your great feedback. Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
Comment from tfawcus
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Ha! Ha! Fifty kilometres on a bike and I'd be walking funnily for a week - the Ministry of Silly Walks wouldn't be in it! Bacon and egg butties brought back some happy memories! I once knew a girl in London whose favorite fare was chip butties! LOL

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
    Mmmm chip butties! Love 'em, with ketchup tomato preferably! Thank you for your great feedback, Tony :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Domino 2
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Great to read your positive notes, Debs, and I hope you ASRE able to walk after that - it would kill me off! ;-)

Can't beat an egg and bacon butty.

Great fun description of your trip in excellent word economy.

Cheers, Ray xx


 Comment Written 05-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
    Hi Ray :) Thank you for your lovely comments. Not feeling too bad this morning tbh - I've been out for a 4k run to stretch out and try to run the aches off - feel it in my knees and my bum bones most! That egg and bacon butty was to die for LOL!
    Best wishes, Debs x
Comment from misscookie
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I love the bike sit cover it is very pretty.
Believe me after few miles you will not feel the comfort any more. LOL
Thank you for sharing this delightful poem.
Cookie

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
    Hi miss cookie :) thanks for your great feedback. I appreciate it as always, love Debra x
reply by misscookie on 05-Apr-2016
    You're are very welcome. Until next time.
    Hugs and prayers
    Cookie
Comment from MacMhuirich
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This sounds like a real fun day but can I make a suggestion - get a tandem, ok you might need to look at a bum all the way through the bike ride but you won't need to do all the work :) Hope you had a happy birthday.
Bless you
John

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
    Ooh, now that's an idea, John! Thank you for your fun feedback and birthday wishes :) kindest regards as always, Debra
Comment from ~Dovey
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Hi Debra,

Thanks for sharing your birthday ride and treat with your husband. That sounds like an ambitious undertaking for the first ride of the season. I'd be sore too, I'm sure! lol Keep up the great work with your book entries :)

Kim

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
    Hi Kim :) Thank you for your kind and encouraging feedback. I appreciate it :) best wishes, Debra
Comment from MelB
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That's not just a bike ride - that's a bike marathon! A fun and uplifting poem with great use of alliteration. Sounds like you had a great birthday!

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
    I did! Thank you Mel :) Best wishes, Debra
reply by MelB on 05-Apr-2016
    You're welcome. Glad you had a great day:)