Musings Of My Muddled Mind
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Birthday Bike Ride"NaPoWriMo April 2016
22 total reviews
Comment from Lulube
Cute poem and I'm glad that you two got some time away and alone. Might try a fatter, wider seat, I hate those skinny ones, they do leave saddle sores. or fatten up the bum for padding. lol leg squats.
lulube
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2016
Cute poem and I'm glad that you two got some time away and alone. Might try a fatter, wider seat, I hate those skinny ones, they do leave saddle sores. or fatten up the bum for padding. lol leg squats.
lulube
Comment Written 06-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2016
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LOL! Thanks Lulube :) I think a comfy seat is in order...got enough padding on my behind! Cheers! Debs x
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me too
lulube
Comment from BeasPeas
What an interesting and fun birthday. To go on a bike ride with your hubby is a great present. It's nice he does things like that. Mine never did. It sounds like your tea was yummy. A happy birthday for you despite the aches after the ride. Thanks for sharing your day with us. :) Marilyn
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2016
What an interesting and fun birthday. To go on a bike ride with your hubby is a great present. It's nice he does things like that. Mine never did. It sounds like your tea was yummy. A happy birthday for you despite the aches after the ride. Thanks for sharing your day with us. :) Marilyn
Comment Written 05-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2016
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Thanks so much, Marilyn :) I had a lovely day! Best wishes, Debra x
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL!! That looks painful! I gave up my indoor exercise bike because it hurt my bum, riding that far, my goodness, I wouldn't be able to walk for a month! I am so pleased you enjoyed your day together, Debra, I hope you have loads more! xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
LOL!! That looks painful! I gave up my indoor exercise bike because it hurt my bum, riding that far, my goodness, I wouldn't be able to walk for a month! I am so pleased you enjoyed your day together, Debra, I hope you have loads more! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 05-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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Me too, Sandra :) Thank you for your lovely feedback, much love, Debra :)
Comment from frogbook
This is a cute one with a great rhyming quality as well as the excellent humor. Maybe a pillow on top of the little seat cover?-haha.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
This is a cute one with a great rhyming quality as well as the excellent humor. Maybe a pillow on top of the little seat cover?-haha.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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Good idea! Thank you for your great feedback. Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
Comment from tfawcus
Ha! Ha! Fifty kilometres on a bike and I'd be walking funnily for a week - the Ministry of Silly Walks wouldn't be in it! Bacon and egg butties brought back some happy memories! I once knew a girl in London whose favorite fare was chip butties! LOL
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
Ha! Ha! Fifty kilometres on a bike and I'd be walking funnily for a week - the Ministry of Silly Walks wouldn't be in it! Bacon and egg butties brought back some happy memories! I once knew a girl in London whose favorite fare was chip butties! LOL
Comment Written 05-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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Mmmm chip butties! Love 'em, with ketchup tomato preferably! Thank you for your great feedback, Tony :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Domino 2
Great to read your positive notes, Debs, and I hope you ASRE able to walk after that - it would kill me off! ;-)
Can't beat an egg and bacon butty.
Great fun description of your trip in excellent word economy.
Cheers, Ray xx
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
Great to read your positive notes, Debs, and I hope you ASRE able to walk after that - it would kill me off! ;-)
Can't beat an egg and bacon butty.
Great fun description of your trip in excellent word economy.
Cheers, Ray xx
Comment Written 05-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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Hi Ray :) Thank you for your lovely comments. Not feeling too bad this morning tbh - I've been out for a 4k run to stretch out and try to run the aches off - feel it in my knees and my bum bones most! That egg and bacon butty was to die for LOL!
Best wishes, Debs x
Comment from misscookie
I love the bike sit cover it is very pretty.
Believe me after few miles you will not feel the comfort any more. LOL
Thank you for sharing this delightful poem.
Cookie
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
I love the bike sit cover it is very pretty.
Believe me after few miles you will not feel the comfort any more. LOL
Thank you for sharing this delightful poem.
Cookie
Comment Written 05-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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Hi miss cookie :) thanks for your great feedback. I appreciate it as always, love Debra x
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You're are very welcome. Until next time.
Hugs and prayers
Cookie
Comment from MacMhuirich
This sounds like a real fun day but can I make a suggestion - get a tandem, ok you might need to look at a bum all the way through the bike ride but you won't need to do all the work :) Hope you had a happy birthday.
Bless you
John
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
This sounds like a real fun day but can I make a suggestion - get a tandem, ok you might need to look at a bum all the way through the bike ride but you won't need to do all the work :) Hope you had a happy birthday.
Bless you
John
Comment Written 05-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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Ooh, now that's an idea, John! Thank you for your fun feedback and birthday wishes :) kindest regards as always, Debra
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Debra,
Thanks for sharing your birthday ride and treat with your husband. That sounds like an ambitious undertaking for the first ride of the season. I'd be sore too, I'm sure! lol Keep up the great work with your book entries :)
Kim
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
Hi Debra,
Thanks for sharing your birthday ride and treat with your husband. That sounds like an ambitious undertaking for the first ride of the season. I'd be sore too, I'm sure! lol Keep up the great work with your book entries :)
Kim
Comment Written 05-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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Hi Kim :) Thank you for your kind and encouraging feedback. I appreciate it :) best wishes, Debra
Comment from MelB
That's not just a bike ride - that's a bike marathon! A fun and uplifting poem with great use of alliteration. Sounds like you had a great birthday!
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
That's not just a bike ride - that's a bike marathon! A fun and uplifting poem with great use of alliteration. Sounds like you had a great birthday!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2016
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I did! Thank you Mel :) Best wishes, Debra
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You're welcome. Glad you had a great day:)