Anamnesis
contest entry22 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem is a poignant story of the regrets of a broken love. I like the illustrations of the poem. The show the brokeness of the relationship like the way you do the line breaks.
Congrats on placing in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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This poem is a poignant story of the regrets of a broken love. I like the illustrations of the poem. The show the brokeness of the relationship like the way you do the line breaks.
Congrats on placing in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 08-Apr-2016
Comment from evilynne
That is a sad little poem; I think it fits the category quite well. The picture is excellent,too. I wish you the best of luck in the contest (if it isn't already over). Evi
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2016
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That is a sad little poem; I think it fits the category quite well. The picture is excellent,too. I wish you the best of luck in the contest (if it isn't already over). Evi
Comment Written 06-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2016
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Hi Evi :) Thank you for your lovely feedback... I actually just found out I received a 2nd place ribbon for this one! Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
Comment from Slythytove2
The undisputed champion of the straight-to-the-point shorty. Where do you find the time? I'm always amazed at women! Men are always ready to tell you what a hard day thy just had and can't lift another finger,while women who've been busy all day with their own job, the kids, the house, the meals- can find the time to commiserate and accommodate.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
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The undisputed champion of the straight-to-the-point shorty. Where do you find the time? I'm always amazed at women! Men are always ready to tell you what a hard day thy just had and can't lift another finger,while women who've been busy all day with their own job, the kids, the house, the meals- can find the time to commiserate and accommodate.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
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Hi Chuck :) I honestly don't know how we do it! I think it's called burning the candle at both ends! LOL
Thank you for the stars :)
Kindest regards as always, Debra
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You're so welcome.
Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow
Oh I like what you did there. I think forgetting is something that can never really occur. Many times we would like to forget but that's not the way memory usually works. Good luck with this one.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
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Oh I like what you did there. I think forgetting is something that can never really occur. Many times we would like to forget but that's not the way memory usually works. Good luck with this one.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
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Hi :) Thank you for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
Comment from krys123
Hello Debra;
-I am read many antonym poems but never is sweet and is well versed is this one.
flow so smoothly throughout the writing and is physically expressed in his imagery.
- the words are definitely part of the antonym structure and I used excellently well in this circumstance.
- the picture very appropriate and relative to the concept and theme of your writing and fits perfectly.
- good luck in the contest and may the good Lord be with you always.
Alex
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
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Hello Debra;
-I am read many antonym poems but never is sweet and is well versed is this one.
flow so smoothly throughout the writing and is physically expressed in his imagery.
- the words are definitely part of the antonym structure and I used excellently well in this circumstance.
- the picture very appropriate and relative to the concept and theme of your writing and fits perfectly.
- good luck in the contest and may the good Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 31-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
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Hi Alex :) Thank you for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
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you are very welcome Debra.
Alex
Comment from JennaG
This is really well done, Debra! The words "Remember" and "Forget" don't seem at all forced to meet the requirements of the form. It reads like a perfectly smooth flow of thought. I love the picture you chose as well. Great work! Best of luck to you in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
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This is really well done, Debra! The words "Remember" and "Forget" don't seem at all forced to meet the requirements of the form. It reads like a perfectly smooth flow of thought. I love the picture you chose as well. Great work! Best of luck to you in the contest. :)
Comment Written 31-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
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Hi Jenna :) Thank you for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
Comment from rama devi
Poignant and effective entry for the contest. I like the conversational style and the emotional substance hidden between the lines. Excellent work. Good presentation with the photos juxtaposed...together and apart.
Good luck!
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
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Poignant and effective entry for the contest. I like the conversational style and the emotional substance hidden between the lines. Excellent work. Good presentation with the photos juxtaposed...together and apart.
Good luck!
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 31-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
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Hi rama :) Thank you for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
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Comment from MacMhuirich
This is a wonderful entry for the contest. The wording is brilliant and the artwork compliments the words so well. A superb presentation. Best wishes for the contest.
Bless you
John
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
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This is a wonderful entry for the contest. The wording is brilliant and the artwork compliments the words so well. A superb presentation. Best wishes for the contest.
Bless you
John
Comment Written 31-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
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Hi John :) Thank you for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Debra
= This is a super entry.
= Cool split screen artwork too.
= Well composed and presented.
= Good luck in the contest.
* A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside Down! *
Jacqueline M Franklin (*_*)
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
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Hi, Debra
= This is a super entry.
= Cool split screen artwork too.
= Well composed and presented.
= Good luck in the contest.
* A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside Down! *
Jacqueline M Franklin (*_*)
Comment Written 31-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
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Hi Jax :) Thank you for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
Comment from lightink
You even added an antonym image! :) Okay, with a bit of inventive word choice on my end!
Such a beautiful, deep one.. and I love the free verse like display!
Yep, it's hard to feel like you+Iā? us :(!
You make me want to write a full poem about it!
I could very much imagine this piece doing well in the contest but at times, the committee acts in mysterious ways (as Kiwisteveh would say).
I wish you good luck with it!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
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You even added an antonym image! :) Okay, with a bit of inventive word choice on my end!
Such a beautiful, deep one.. and I love the free verse like display!
Yep, it's hard to feel like you+Iā? us :(!
You make me want to write a full poem about it!
I could very much imagine this piece doing well in the contest but at times, the committee acts in mysterious ways (as Kiwisteveh would say).
I wish you good luck with it!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016
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Hey J, thank you so much for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Best wishes, Debra x
