The Lunchroom Affair
Tale of love15 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
A good little flash-fiction story and true enough. So many kids/people have life-threatening allergies. I'm one of them.
Got to be careful not to ingest anything on the list. Marilyn
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2016
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A good little flash-fiction story and true enough. So many kids/people have life-threatening allergies. I'm one of them.
Got to be careful not to ingest anything on the list. Marilyn
Comment Written 19-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2016
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Thank you for the wonderful review. I appreciate your time and feedback. Gretchen
Comment from phaedra
An excellent flash fiction. Very scary also, almost expiring for love. I can see this happening in real life.
A great take on the classic fated teenage romance.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2016
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An excellent flash fiction. Very scary also, almost expiring for love. I can see this happening in real life.
A great take on the classic fated teenage romance.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2016
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Dying for a kiss should have been the title, I guess. Thank you so much for your review. Gretchen
Comment from Spiritual Echo
This is very good. TYPO in last line--in the words totally.
Great scene setting, infused with a day-dreamer's tone that works perfectly for this plot and characters.
Also read your pedophile character-based story. Both excellent.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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This is very good. TYPO in last line--in the words totally.
Great scene setting, infused with a day-dreamer's tone that works perfectly for this plot and characters.
Also read your pedophile character-based story. Both excellent.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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Thank you for this wonderful review of my flash fiction . Gretchen
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
He knew the peanut butter kiss would be harmful, yet he went for it anyway. Now that's true love. LOL! This is really cute, with a totally unexpected outcome. I'm thinking they're in high school. Maybe junior high or even less. :)
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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He knew the peanut butter kiss would be harmful, yet he went for it anyway. Now that's true love. LOL! This is really cute, with a totally unexpected outcome. I'm thinking they're in high school. Maybe junior high or even less. :)
Comment Written 16-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. Gretchen
Comment from Joy Graham
Those nut allergies can be deadly. There was a girl in my old school that wanted to get out of gym class so she had a bite of peanut butter sandwich. It killed her.
My grandson is skin and bones and fussy as all get out. The two types of sandwiches he will eat are peanut butter or nutella. He can't take either to school so his lunch is pretty pitiful.
Oh well, he can eat as soon as he gets home from school.
I enjoyed your little love story and that the boy thought it was worth it :)
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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Those nut allergies can be deadly. There was a girl in my old school that wanted to get out of gym class so she had a bite of peanut butter sandwich. It killed her.
My grandson is skin and bones and fussy as all get out. The two types of sandwiches he will eat are peanut butter or nutella. He can't take either to school so his lunch is pretty pitiful.
Oh well, he can eat as soon as he gets home from school.
I enjoyed your little love story and that the boy thought it was worth it :)
Comment Written 16-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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Thank you for the wonderful review. Gretchen
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Gretchen
= Those darn allergies.
= Who knew PBJ could be so treacherous. (*<*)
= Cute little tale. When one doesn't suffer from food allergies, it's hard to identify with it---unless you're the unlucky to have them.
*** I apologize for my late response ***
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* Cheers & Blessings *
Keep Smilin'... Jackie <> Jax (*<*)
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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Hi, Gretchen
= Those darn allergies.
= Who knew PBJ could be so treacherous. (*<*)
= Cute little tale. When one doesn't suffer from food allergies, it's hard to identify with it---unless you're the unlucky to have them.
*** I apologize for my late response ***
= Just edited/published a new book.
= Highlighted w/plugin to = amazon.com = on my profile page.
= Working on getting caught up on reviews/reviewing.
* Cheers & Blessings *
Keep Smilin'... Jackie <> Jax (*<*)
Comment Written 16-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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Thank you for the wonderful review. Gretchen
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Thank you for the wonderful review. Gretchen
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Poisoned with a kiss. I guess food allergies can be a bitch. I worked with a Girl who was allergic to sea food and didn't know it. Went out to dinner and ordered something in that family and nearly died before the medics got there. A peanut
butter kiss can be deadly too. Good job Gretchen
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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Poisoned with a kiss. I guess food allergies can be a bitch. I worked with a Girl who was allergic to sea food and didn't know it. Went out to dinner and ordered something in that family and nearly died before the medics got there. A peanut
butter kiss can be deadly too. Good job Gretchen
Comment Written 16-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. Gretchen
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. Gretchen
Comment from Dr. Nad
The Lunchroom Affair Is a very sweet portrayal of adolescent love. It is described as puppy love, but as one recipient of this youthful adoration once said, it sure is real to the puppy! May God Bless you
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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The Lunchroom Affair Is a very sweet portrayal of adolescent love. It is described as puppy love, but as one recipient of this youthful adoration once said, it sure is real to the puppy! May God Bless you
Comment Written 16-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. Gretchen
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You are very welcome,
Embrace the Love from above!
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You are very welcome,
Embrace the Love from above!
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. Gretchen
Comment from Jay Squires
I can find no fault, only praise for this very well-written, entertaining piece of flash fiction. It's not easy to develop character, plot and setting to the climax and resolution in so short a span. You did very well. If I had a six you'd get it.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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I can find no fault, only praise for this very well-written, entertaining piece of flash fiction. It's not easy to develop character, plot and setting to the climax and resolution in so short a span. You did very well. If I had a six you'd get it.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. Gretchen
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. Gretchen
Comment from Sankey
Wow! Something different ha. Good read. Quick but also worth it as the dreamer said. Loved them picture as well. Can't wait to read more of your stuff. Anymore family tales?
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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Wow! Something different ha. Good read. Quick but also worth it as the dreamer said. Loved them picture as well. Can't wait to read more of your stuff. Anymore family tales?
Comment Written 15-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. Gretchen
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. Gretchen
