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Comment from happykat4
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What a wonderful way to tell people to start to make the choice to follow Christ because at death you will be with Him or in shell. It also speak to time and the time is right now. He gave us free will I pray we all open our eyes soon. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016
    Thank you sooo much..
Comment from LanceHill
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Very well stated. God does give us that option. His desire is for us to spend eternity with Him. He wants no one to perish. Yet so many still choose to not come to Him. Have a great week. God bless.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016
    Thank you so kindly, Lance
Comment from Joan E.
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Words to live by: "if your eye can't listen, let sight be your guide" and have "a plan". I admired your reference to Washington, but your final stanza is too dark for me! Sighs- Joan

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016
    Thanks Joan. Xo
Comment from MidnightReicheru
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I really like this poem. Something about it just seems like a universal truth of beauty being in the eye of the beholder. Great job and PS I like the picture you've chosen. :)

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016
    Thank you honey..
Comment from Mai Mai
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This is an interesting and unusual piece. It leaves us to make a choice which could have major ramifications on our soul. Good job and good luck.

Mai Mai

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2016
    Yes. Thank you so very much....
Comment from Ben Colder
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Who creates the rules for poetry? Is each poem guided by man's thoughts or other's opinion? , Just asking. I noticed in the last 5-7-5 poem contest here on Fan story, the winning contestant had a photo, as well as most of the others. Upon your advice, I changed mine and never got a vote. The contest before I won with a photo, so I ask, who makes the rules, with or without? Just asking. Notice I never disrespected your work with a 3 star.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2016
    If they are allowing pictures with Haiku poetry than they aren't going by Haiku rules. They are not being honest nor judging correctly. Sometimes I ask here if it is an emotional contest or site or not. Three stars isn't disrespect that I know of. It means average, right. Ben, did I do something?
Comment from dmt1967
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I knew it was you, even before I saw your name. You have a distinctive way of writing which, for most poets, take decades to master. This is another great poem and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2016
    Thank you so very much...
Comment from TPAC
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Writer statements are touching to me, I feel a hidden message in this work. "can't make you, go to the gold or hang down low untrained,". Definate shot at rating of works done. Great defining of occurrence in my opinion. Super read.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2016
    Thank you so much Hun.
Comment from DonandVicki
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It is most obvious that you spent a lot of time and effort constructing this work. Nice rhyming structure and a good message in the content.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2016
    Thank you my dear friend.
Comment from mermaids
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Love the pic, it adds to the impact of your words. If your ears can't listen, let sight be your guide, are two lines that are marvelous and make the reader think. You have an excellent use of words that bring forth feelings.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2016


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016
    Thank you so much. Hugs..