Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the story. You are missing your friend. It affects your work. Soon you may get your muse back. Do it for a good friend. Great work.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have great weekend.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for keeping Brooke in our thoughts and saluting true FanStorians who try to comply with the rules, although we all sometimes stumble. I was glad you shared another of Angelheart's striking artworks. Hugs and happy weekend- Joan

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.

Comment from Treischel

Excellent

Not really sure what you are getting at here, maybe a response to a bad review would be my guess. At any rate, yes i certainly do miss Brooke. We all do.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

There are other teachers on fan story, maybe not in the same status as Brooke, but in their own rights they are quality teachers. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great wekkend.

reply by c_lucas on 19-Aug-2015

You're welcome, Robina. Charlie

Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

You pose some interesting thoughts here, and this piece also indicates that you miss the shining example of Brooke's perfect poetry. They were fun to read, and we can only hope that she will return.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend. Yes.

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Ine. Great work mate but never give up. Brooke certainly would be sad if you did and so would this old feral my friend. You are doing very well with your writing and I am proud of you. Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely weekend. Good morning, Fez.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

Do you know what happen to her?
I miss her too.
She was more than a writer to me she was a teacher.
A caring human being.
Cookie

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely weekend. She got progressive MS, she moved to near her daughter. Have not heard since.

reply by misscookie on 15-Aug-2015

You're very welcome, have a safe and blessed week end.
Cookie

Comment from harleyangelbrat

Excellent

Your story is true and really touched my heart. I've been sick and haven't been here in a while, so I missed all of you. I really enjoyed reading this very much. God bless you! (what happened to Brook?)

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week. Glad you are back again. Brooke got ill with progressive MS and is going to stay near her daughter.

reply by harleyangelbrat on 13-Aug-2015

You are very welcome. Sorry to hear about Brook. She is in my prayers. I hope you have a blessed day. Marilyn

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This is a nice send up for the existing rules of Fanstory, Ine. There are always gripes, though few are far from arrogance or contempt. I, like you, enjoy this sight as a game, of sorts. It's a writing game where I can get better and sometimes receive affirmation. Other than that, when people take the site or themselves too seriously, it gets a bit tedious.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week.

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi Ine - you avoided the answer - so you should. Yes we all miss Brooke - haven't heard much since her move near to her daughter - perhaps no news is good news. Interesting read. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week.